假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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239680. （2023•全国•乙卷） ?假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
?Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair.She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore.The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect.Mom was sure same color would look great on her.She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes，just as the directions saying.However，instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for，she final got purple hair.She went right into the shower to washing it，but it was no use.At least one thing proved truth：the color wouldn't wash out.

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日常生活，记叙文，

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（1）his改为her（2）去掉studied后with（3）choose改为chose（4）that改为whose（5）same前加the（6）or改为and（7）saying改为said（8）final改为finally（9）washing改为wash（10）truth改为true

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Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair.She studied ~~with~~ all the hair products at the drugstore.The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect.Mom was sure ∧ same color would look great on her.She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes，just as the directions saying.However，instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for，she final got purple hair.She went right in﹣to the shower to washing it，but it was no use.At least one thing proved truth：the color wouldn't wash out.
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（1）考查代词。句意：上周五，我妈妈决定染头发。此处指代my mom，要用代词her。故his改为her。
（2）考查词语用法。句意：她研究了药店里所有的护发产品。studied是及物动词，后接名词作宾语时不需要介词with。故去掉studied后with。
（3）考查动词时态。句意：她选的颜色装在一个盒子里，盒子里有一张女人的照片，她的头发颜色看起来非常完美。根据前文中时间状语Last Friday可知，要用一般过去时。故choose改为chose。
（4）考查定语从句。句意：她选的颜色装在一个盒子里，盒子里有一张女人的照片，她的头发颜色看起来非常完美。先行词woman在定语从句中作名词词组hair color的定语，用关系代词whose引导从句。故that改为whose。
（5）考查定冠词。句意：妈妈确信同样的颜色染在她头上会很好看。same用作形容词时指谈论的不同人和不同事物是同样的或实际上是同一个人或同一个事物，总和the连用。故same前加the。
（6）考查连词。句意：她把头发染成新的颜色，按照说明坐了30分钟。put the new color on her hair和sat still for 30 minutes之间是并列关系而非选择关系，用连词and连接。故or改为and。
（7）考查谓语动词。句意：她把头发染成新的颜色，按照说明坐了30分钟。as引导的从句中缺少谓语动词，因讲述的是过去的事情，谓语动词用一般过去时。故saying改为said。
（8）考查副词。句意：然而，她最终得到的不是她所希望的棕红色头发，而是紫色的头发。got是动词，要用副词形式finally修饰。故final改为finally。
（9）考查动词不定式。句意：她直接冲进浴室去洗，但没有用。此处是动词不定式作目的状语，不定式符号to后接动词原形。故washing改为wash。
（10）考查形容词。句意：至少有一件事被证明是正确的：这种颜色洗不掉。proved是连系动词，后接形容词true作表语。故truth改为true。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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共享时间:2023-05-18 难度:2 相似度:2

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注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
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Some international students visit our school last week.To help them better understanding our tea- drinking culture，I took them to the tea room in our school and introduced history of tea-making and tea culture to them.All the international student were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them what to make tea.I sat at a table，slowly explain every step of the process while making tea.All of them were very amazed that they couldn't wait to have a try ourselves.Soon the atmosphere in the tea room be- came well and we had a lot of fun practising making tea.In the end，we took a group photo to memorize the moment we won't forget it.

共享时间:2022-03-01 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mary is one of my classmate，who I admire very much.She is cheerful but friendly，keeping smiling at others.That impresses me most is her sweet voice.The sound of her singing is as a waterfall on a mountain，flowed effortlessly and leaving a sense of calm.She is very focused when singing.Much of us usually hear her to sing songs after class.She always active participates in local music contests.So far，she won two prizes in our city.She also teaches us to sing.As a result，influencing by her，more and more students in our class like to sing.

共享时间:2024-02-07 难度:2 相似度:1

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201697. （2024•西工大附中•模拟） I've had a lot of wonderfully experiences during Senior High.Among them，anything between my class teacher and me is the most unforgettable.
I was addicting to online games in Senior One，which meant I was unable to concentrate my studies.Learning this，my class teacher wanted to help me out by compete with me.He said I would have to play games less unless I was beaten.I was so confident that I agreed.Therefore，I was told later our class teacher was good at the online games.You can imagine the result of our competition.From then on，I promised I will spend most of my time on my lessons.I can't thank my teachers too much for his help.

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214474. （2019•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month，China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding．It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC．In this day，there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country．In recent years，the national holiday also refers to the golden week，what is a mini-holiday that all people look forward to it．With the improvement of people's living standard，they have more money or desire to travel．Beside，it is a good chance have a good rest．Therefore，the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese．

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