假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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218043. （2023•长安区•高三上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday，I went to pay a visit to my former neighbor.Stan.He and I would live next each other fora few years.About several months ago，word came which the old building，as well as many other similar one，was going to be pulled up to make room for a main street.So we had to separate.Stan's home now is in the north of the city near the beautiful lake.His house is much big than before.The only problem trouble him is that it takes quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Thus，Stan isn't concerned about the long distance.He tells us that a new subway line is being built now and he is sure of life will be better and much more convenient in the future.

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日常生活，记叙文，

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（1）next后加to （2）which改为that （3）one改为ones （4）up改为down （5）the改为a （6）big改为bigger （7）trouble改为troubling （8）Thus改为However （9）us改为me （10）去掉of

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The day before yesterday，I went to pay a visit to my former neighbor.Stan.He and I would live next∧each other fora few years.About several months ago，word came which the old building，as well as many other similar one，was going to be pulled up to make room for a main street.So we had to separate.Stan's home now is in the north of the city near the beautiful lake.His house is much big than before.The only problem trouble him is that it takes quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Thus，Stan isn't concerned about the long distance.He tells us that a new subway line is being built now and he is sure of life will be better and much more convenient in the future.
（1）考查介词。句意：他和我在一起住了几年。分析句子结构可知，此处是固定短语next to，意为"紧挨着、靠近"。故在next后加to。
（2）考查同位语从句。句意：大约几个月前，有消息说，这座老建筑以及许多其他类似的建筑将被拆除，以便为一条主要街道腾出空间。此处为同位语从句，解释说明word的内容，从句不缺少成分，句意完整，应用只起连接作用、无实意的that引导。故把which改为that。
（3）考查代词。句意：大约几个月前，有消息说，这座老建筑以及许多其他类似的建筑将被拆除，以便为一条主要街道腾出空间。分析句子结构可知，many后接可数名词的复数形式，one指代"很多老建筑"，应使用其复数形式。故将one改为ones。
（4）考查动词短语。句意：大约几个月前，有消息说，这座老建筑以及许多其他类似的建筑将被拆除，以便为一条主要街道腾出空间。分析句子结构和语境可知，此处应表示建筑被拆掉才能为主街腾出空间，应使用固定短语pull down，意为"拆除"。故将up改为down。
（5）考查冠词。句意：斯坦的家现在在城市的北部，靠近一个美丽的湖。分析句子结构可知，此处泛指"一个美丽的湖"，且beautiful为辅音音素开头的单词，应使用不定冠词a修饰。故将the改为a。
（6）考查形容词比较级。句意：他的房子比以前大得多。分析句子结构可知，much后接形容词比较级进行修饰，应使用其比较级形式。故将big改为bigger。
（7）考查现在分词。句意：唯一困扰他的问题是到市中心要花很长时间。分析句子结构可知，句中已有谓语is，trouble（困扰）需使用非谓语形式，主语the only problem与trouble之间是逻辑上的主动关系，因此需使用现在分词形式。故将trouble改为troubling。
（8）考查副词。句意：然而，斯坦似乎不关心这么长的距离。Thus表示前后是因果关系，这里上下文之间存在着转折关系，应使用however表示转折关系。故把Thus改为However。
（9）考查代词。句意：他告诉我，一条新的地铁线路正在建设中，他相信未来的生活将会更好，更方便。分析句子结构并根据语境可知，该句表示Stan告诉作者"我"，谓语tells后应使用其宾格形式。故将us改为me。
（10）考查介词。句意：他告诉我，一条新的地铁线路正在建设中，他相信未来的生活将会更好，更方便。分析句子结构可知，此处是固定句型Be sure （that）"相信……"，不需要使用介词连接。故去掉of。

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My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window.We both waited for a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I was so eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my step through the crowd.Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for them，and I had no luck.Even bad，I had no money with me，which meant I had to walk home.How an awful experience!

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Last Sunday，my father wanted to make breakfast for we.He got all the things prepare in the kitchen.The recipe he chose looked easily，with a picture of a delicious breakfast.He followed the recipe and waited with patient.However，instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for，it was turned out to be a total mess.He try to fix it.To his disappointment，he didn't success.As a result，we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal.There，we all had great time together，creating memories whose would last a lifetime.

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Some international students visit our school last week.To help them better understanding our tea- drinking culture，I took them to the tea room in our school and introduced history of tea-making and tea culture to them.All the international student were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them what to make tea.I sat at a table，slowly explain every step of the process while making tea.All of them were very amazed that they couldn't wait to have a try ourselves.Soon the atmosphere in the tea room be- came well and we had a lot of fun practising making tea.In the end，we took a group photo to memorize the moment we won't forget it.

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When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He was realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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217977. （2023•西安中学•高三上四月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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218063. （2023•长安区•高二上一月）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。.
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_____
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_____

共享时间:2023-10-29 难度:3 相似度:0.83

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    One afternoon，on her way home from school，Fauna saw a little dog wandering near the park.Its fur was messy，and it looked lost，sniffing the ground as if searching for something.Feeling curious and hopeful，Fauna bent down and called to it.The dog quickly ran over，wagging （摇） its tail and gently pressing its nose into her hand，like they had known each other forever.
    She looked around，but no one seemed to be searching for the dog.Feeling pity for the lost dog，Fauna decided to take it home.As they walked side by side，her heart swelled with joy.It felt as though this was the pet she had always dreamed of—a friend she had been waiting for.
    At the front door，Fauna's mother greeted her with a warm smile.Although she found the dog adorable，she gently reminded Fauna that they needed to try and find its owner.If the dog was lost，someone must be missing it.Fauna reluctantly （不情愿地） agreed，though part of her wished no one would come forward to claim the little dog.
    Over the next few days，Fauna and the dog—whom she named Buddy—grew inseparable.She fed him，played with him，and let him sleep curled up at the foot of her bed.Every day，it became harder to imagine life without him.Buddy seemed happy too，wagging his tail whenever she came home from school.But Fauna knew deep down that she had to do the right thing.She and her parents posted flyers around town，hoping to find Buddy's owner.
    Just a few days later，the phone rang.Fauna's heart sank as her father answered.From the conversation，it was clear that the caller was Buddy's owner.He described Buddy perfectly—the friendly eyes and playful personality.Fauna knew Buddy would soon be leaving her.Her father arranged for the owner to come by and pick Buddy up.
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（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    When the man arrived，the little dog ran straight into his arms，barking with joy.________
    That evening，Fauna sat quietly in her room，feeling the emptiness that Buddy's absence had left behind.________

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214474. （2019•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month，China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding．It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC．In this day，there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country．In recent years，the national holiday also refers to the golden week，what is a mini-holiday that all people look forward to it．With the improvement of people's living standard，they have more money or desire to travel．Beside，it is a good chance have a good rest．Therefore，the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese．

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203763. （2024•西工大附中•高二上期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
    Ollie Simmons was good at maths，but Ruby Riley wasn't.Well，Ruby didn't think she was.She sat next to Ollie and so she just copied him.This was the best way she had found to do maths and she didn't have to think at all.
    One day the teacher said， "We will be having a maths test after lunch." Ruby felt there were butterflies in the stomach. "Can I copy off you？" she whispered to Ollie.Ollie thought for a minute. "What will you give me？" he whispered back.Ruby showed Ollie a stone she had.It was round and smooth and the colour of the sea. "OK!" he said， "Give me the stone，and then you can copy my answers." Ollie got full marks in the maths test and so did Ruby.Their names went on the top of the maths champion chart.
    Every week there was a maths test and every week Ollie and Ruby got full marks together.Ollie had to share the top place with Ruby，but it was worth it.He had a torch，a key chain，a golf ball and a gift box!
    One day，there was a maths test again.This time，Ruby picked a watch，thinking everything would go as usual—Ollie would let her copy and they would be on the top of the chart together again.But she was wrong.The headmaster came into Ruby's class. "I want to see Ollie Simmons，" she said.Ollie was gone for a long time.Then the door opened.It was the headmaster again. "Ruby Riley，" she said， "Come with me，please." Ruby felt like a bird in a cage—there was no way to escape.The headmaster told Ruby that every lunchtime for five weeke had to do maths. "You have to learn to think for yourself，" she said. "And Ollie has to learn a lesson，too.He's going to teach you."
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（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

    Hanging her head down，Ruby felt so regretful for getting Ollie into trouble.___________
    Ollie proved to be a good teacher for Ruby.___________

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