假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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217977. （2023•西安中学•高三上四月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Fast food is become more and more popular，especially among children and teenagers.There are several reason for its popularity.Firstly，it's convenient and save time.Whenever you enter into a fast food restaurant to order your food，it is ready at no time.You can take it away or eat there.Secondly，the atmosphere there is pleasant and comfortably with excellent service and good quality food.Although，fast food is not good for people's health，especially for children.It's not a balance diet.The price of the food there is also high.So to keep fit，eat fast food as few as possible and choose it only when you are in hurry.

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日常生活，议论文，

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（1）become改为becoming（2）reason改为reasons（3）save改为saves（4）去掉into（5）at改为in（6）comfortably改为comfortable（7）Although改为However（8）balance改为balanced（9）few改为little（10）在hurry前加a

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Fast food is become more and more popular，especially among children and teenagers.There are several reason for its popularity.Firstly，it's convenient and save time.Whenever you enter ~~into~~ a fast food restaurant to order your food，it is ready at no time.You can take it away or eat there.Secondly，the atmosphere there is pleasant and comfortably with excellent service and good quality food.Although，fast food is not good for people's health，especially for children.It's not a balance diet.The price of the food there is also high.So to keep fit，eat fast food as few as possible and choose it only when you are in ∧hurry.
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（1）考查时态。句意：快餐正变得越来越受欢迎，尤其是在儿童和青少年中。become是谓语动词，结合句意和助动词is可知，应用现在分词构成现在进行时态，表示现在正在发生的事情。故将become改为becoming。
（2）考查可数名词复数。句意：它受欢迎有几个原因。several意为"几个"，修饰复数名词。故将reason改为reasons。
（3）考查时态语态和主谓一致。句意：首先，它很方便且节省时间。分析句子结构可知，save是谓语动词，与主语it之间是主动关系，描述客观事实，用一般现在时态，主语是单数代词，谓语也用第三人称单数形式。故将save改为saves。
（4）考查及物动词。句意：当你进入快餐店点餐时，它马上就准备好了。enter是及物动词，直接跟宾语a fast food restaurant，不需要介词into。故将into去掉。
（5）考查介词短语。句意：当你进入快餐店点餐时，它马上就准备好了。in no time是固定短语，意为"马上"，符合语境。故将at改为in。
（6）考查形容词。句意：其次，那里的氛围是愉快和舒适的，有优质的服务和优质的食物。此处作表语，用形容词comfortable，与形容词pleasant构成并列关系，表明主语the atmosphere的属性。故将comfortably改为comfortable。
（7）考查逻辑关系。句意：然而，快餐不利于人们的健康，尤其是对儿童。although是连接词，用于引导让步状语从句，句中与句子用逗号隔开，应用副词however作状语，与上文构成转折关系。故将Although改为However。
（8）考查形容词。句意：这不是均衡的饮食。此处作定语，用形容词balanced，意为"均衡的"。故将balance改为balanced。
（9）考查形容词辨析。句意：因此，为了保持健康，尽可能少吃快餐，只有在你赶时间的时候才选择它。few修饰可数名词，fast food是不可数名词，用形容词little修饰。故将few改为little。
（10）考查不定冠词。句意：因此，为了保持健康，尽可能少吃快餐，只有在你赶时间的时候才选择它。in a hurry是固定短语，意为"匆忙地"。故在hurry前加a。

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214520. （2020•西安一中•高一下期中） When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city．I think I would be happy there．
Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside．There the air is clean or the mountains are green．Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted．Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem．The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier．Much rare animals are dying out．We must found ways to protect your environment．If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it．

共享时间:2020-05-22 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214333. （2020•长安区一中•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At lunch in the first day of my high school，I saw a girl sit alone.I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat.Late，we became close friends in following three years.One day，he shared something touching with me. "Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me，wearing a big smile？" she asked me. "I want you to know how much special you are.I was disappointing at that time，but your smile made my day，" she added.
I can't help smile each time I think of the scene，that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.

共享时间:2020-11-14 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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212880. （2024•西安一中•高三下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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Last Sunday，my father wanted to make breakfast for we.He got all the things prepare in the kitchen.The recipe he chose looked easily，with a picture of a delicious breakfast.He followed the recipe and waited with patient.However，instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for，it was turned out to be a total mess.He try to fix it.To his disappointment，he didn't success.As a result，we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal.There，we all had great time together，creating memories whose would last a lifetime.

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213768. （2023•西安三中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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共享时间:2023-05-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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213854. （2022•师大附中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下信件内容。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window.We both waited for a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I was so eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my step through the crowd.Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for them，and I had no luck.Even bad，I had no money with me，which meant I had to walk home.How an awful experience!

共享时间:2022-05-13 难度:2 相似度:1

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    The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
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共享时间:2021-11-14 难度:2 相似度:1

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217902. （2024•华清中学•高二上一月）大学图书馆是否应该向公众开放最近引起了热议。请围绕这一话题写一篇80字左右的文章。要点如下：
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218043. （2023•长安区•高三上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday，I went to pay a visit to my former neighbor.Stan.He and I would live next each other fora few years.About several months ago，word came which the old building，as well as many other similar one，was going to be pulled up to make room for a main street.So we had to separate.Stan's home now is in the north of the city near the beautiful lake.His house is much big than before.The only problem trouble him is that it takes quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Thus，Stan isn't concerned about the long distance.He tells us that a new subway line is being built now and he is sure of life will be better and much more convenient in the future.

共享时间:2023-10-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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214474. （2019•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month，China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding．It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC．In this day，there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country．In recent years，the national holiday also refers to the golden week，what is a mini-holiday that all people look forward to it．With the improvement of people's living standard，they have more money or desire to travel．Beside，it is a good chance have a good rest．Therefore，the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese．

共享时间:2019-11-14 难度:3 相似度:0.83

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