假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201678. （2024•师大附中•八模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He was realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.

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品行与态度，记叙文，

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suggest

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meter

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meters

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raced

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racing

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equally

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said

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nobody

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everybody/everyone

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When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested∧ game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He ~~was~~ realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.
解析
（1）考查冠词。句意：在访问非洲的一个村庄时，一位科学家建议当地的孩子玩一个游戏。game"游戏"为可数名词，此处表示"一个游戏"为泛指，在suggest之后、game之前应加不定冠词，game起始音为辅音，不定冠词为a。故suggest后加a。
（2）考查名词复数。句意：他把一篮子糖果放在100米外的一棵树下。meter"米"前面有数词100，meter用复数形式meters。故meter改为meters。
（3）考查动名词。句意：但是当他说"开始"的时候，孩子们没有争抢，而是手拉手地跑向篮子。instead of为介词短语，后应跟动词race的动名词形式racing作宾语，故raced改为racing。
（4）考查固定短语。句意：但是当他说"开始"的时候，孩子们没有争抢，而是手拉手地跑向篮子。hand in hand"手拉手"为固定短语，句中的介词on应该改为介词in。故on改为in。
（5）考查副词。句意：最后，他们把糖果平均分了。修饰动词divided应用副词equally作状语，故equal改为equally。
（6）考查时态。句意：当被问及为什么这样做时，他们说"Ubuntu"。此句陈述过去的事情，用一般过去时态，故says改为said。
（7）考查代词。句意：它意思是每个人都应该与他人分享幸福。根据上文讲述的孩子们手拉手一起跑向糖果篮子可知，孩子们所说的"Ubuntu"是指每个人都应该与他人一起分享幸福，"每个人"用代词everybody/everyone，故nobody改为everybody/everyone。
（8）考查语态。句意：他意识到，正是Ubuntu的态度帮助人们团结在一起。此句为主从复合句，主句为一般过去时态表述过去的事情，主语He与动词realize之间为主动关系，主句谓语动词为realized。故was删掉。
（9）考查强调句型。句意：他意识到，正是Ubuntu的态度帮助人们团结在一起。此句为主从复合句，宾语从句为强调句型"it is+被强调部分+that+其他"，此句中对名词短语the attitude of Ubuntu进行强调，故which改为that。
（10）考查代词宾格。句意：总的来说，这个词提醒我们社区和相互关心的重要性。remind sb of sth"提醒某人某事"中sb作动词remind的宾语；该句中"我们"作remind的宾语，应该用宾格us。故we改为us。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

    Hanging her head down，Ruby felt so regretful for getting Ollie into trouble.___________
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