假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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214474. （2019•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month，China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding．It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC．In this day，there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country．In recent years，the national holiday also refers to the golden week，what is a mini-holiday that all people look forward to it．With the improvement of people's living standard，they have more money or desire to travel．Beside，it is a good chance have a good rest．Therefore，the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese．

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日常生活，生命的意义与价值，旅游观光，

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Last month，China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding．It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC． In this day，there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country．In recent years，the national holiday also refers to the golden week， what is a mini﹣holiday that all people look forward to it．With the improvement of people's living standard，they have more money or desire to travel． Beside，it is a good chance∧ have a good rest．Therefore，the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese．
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1．we改为us．本题考查人称代词．句中to是介词，后面应该用人称代词宾格．we是主格人称代词，只能做主语．us是宾格．所以we改为us．
2．a 改为the．本题考查冠词．National Day属于专有名词，需要加定冠词the．
3．In改为On．本题考查介词搭配．在具体的某一天应该用介词on．句中this day指的是国庆节这一天．所以用on．
4．holding改为held．本题考查非谓语动词．句中非谓语动作作后置定语，celebrations 与hold是被动关系．所以用held．
5．what改为which．本题考查定语从句．句中含有非限制性定语从句．先行词是the golden week，所以用which．what是不可以用来引导定语从句的．故what改为which．
6．去掉to后面的it．本题考查定语从句．该句含有非限制性定语从句，从句中还含有一个that引导的限制性定语从句，此从句中that充当介词to的宾语，所以原文中to后面的it是多余的，故去掉．
7．or改为and．本题考查连词．句中前后两个名词应该是并列关系而不是选择关系．所以用and．
8．Beside改为Besides．本题考查副词．句中表示此外，而且．beside意思是"在…旁边"，besides意思是"此外，而且"．故Beside改为Besides．
9．chance后加to．本题考查不定式．chance后面一般跟不定式作定语．故加to．
10．mean改为means．本题考查名词主谓一致．本句主语是 the National Day ，是单数形式，其谓语动词也应该用第三人称单数形式，所以 mean改为means．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At lunch in the first day of my high school，I saw a girl sit alone.I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat.Late，we became close friends in following three years.One day，he shared something touching with me. "Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me，wearing a big smile？" she asked me. "I want you to know how much special you are.I was disappointing at that time，but your smile made my day，" she added.
I can't help smile each time I think of the scene，that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.

共享时间:2020-11-14 难度:1 相似度:1.33

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共享时间:2020-05-22 难度:1 相似度:1.33

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214538. （2020•西安一中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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共享时间:2020-05-11 难度:1 相似度:1.33

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214935. （2017•西安中学•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2017-05-11 难度:1 相似度:1.33

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2023-02-23 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2024-05-15 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Mike must have benefited great from humor.He is kind but overweight，which brings to him a lot of trouble.Once one of my classmate laughed at him， "Why are you so fat？" We all stopped to stare at him，wondered how Mike would answer the question.He just said in the calm voice， "Well，because my size must large enough to hold my large heart of love." Hearing her words，we all burst into laughter.Not only did Mike take the joke，but he also managed to cope with the embarrassed situation.What an important part humor play in our daily life!Why not possess a sense of humor or go along the road of life with happiness all the way？

共享时间:2023-05-18 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window.We both waited for a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I was so eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my step through the crowd.Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for them，and I had no luck.Even bad，I had no money with me，which meant I had to walk home.How an awful experience!

共享时间:2022-05-13 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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213949. （2021•西安中学•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
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共享时间:2021-11-14 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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214763. （2017•西安中学•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have an English pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenty，and with hobbies similar to mine．In my mind，she is someone interesting in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it is better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at home for some time．I hope I can share her my experiences in travelling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country．I am looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

共享时间:2017-11-30 难度:2 相似度:0.83

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