假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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203924. （2024•鄠邑区•高三上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mary is one of my classmate，who I admire very much.She is cheerful but friendly，keeping smiling at others.That impresses me most is her sweet voice.The sound of her singing is as a waterfall on a mountain，flowed effortlessly and leaving a sense of calm.She is very focused when singing.Much of us usually hear her to sing songs after class.She always active participates in local music contests.So far，she won two prizes in our city.She also teaches us to sing.As a result，influencing by her，more and more students in our class like to sing.

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人际交往，记叙文，

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1.classmate

改为

classmates

；

2.but

改为

and

；

3.That

改为

What

；

4.as

改为

；

5.flowed

改为

flowing

；

6.Much

改为

Many

；

去掉

；

8.active

改为

actively

；

9.won

前加

has

；

10.influencing

改为

influenced

。

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Mary is one of my classmate，who I admire very much.She is cheerful but friendly，keeping smiling at others.That impresses me most is her sweet voice.The sound of her singing is as a waterfall on a mountain，flowed effortlessly and leaving a sense of calm.She is very focused when singing.Much of us usually hear her to sing songs after class.She always active participates in local music contests.So far，she∧ won two prizes in our city.She also teaches us to sing.As a result，influencing by her，more and more students in our class like to sing.
详解：
1.考查可数名词复数。句意：玛丽是我的一个同学，我非常钦佩她。classmate"同学"是可数名词，根据"one of+可数名词复数"可知，此处应用其复数形式。故classmate改为classmates。
2.考查连词。句意：她开朗友好，对别人总是面带微笑。根据句意可知，cheerful和friendly之间为并列关系，而非转折关系，故应用and连接。故but改为and。
3.考查主语从句引导词。句意：给我印象最深的是她甜美的嗓音。分析可知，此处引导主语从句，从句缺少主语，指事物，故应用连接代词what引导。故That改为What。
4.考查介词。句意：她的歌声就像山上的瀑布，毫不费力地流过，给人一种平静的感觉。根据句意可知，此处应用介词like表示"像"。故as改为like。
5.考查现在分词。句意：她的歌声就像山上的瀑布，毫不费力地流过，给人一种平静的感觉。分析可知，此处应用非谓语动词作状语，动词flow与其逻辑主语a waterfall之间是主谓关系，故应用现在分词形式作状语。故flowed改为flowing。
6.考查代词。句意：我们大多数人通常在课后听她唱歌。分析可知，此处代指classmates，应用many。故Much改为Many。
7.考查动词不定式。句意：我们大多数人通常在课后听她唱歌。动词hear后常跟省略to的不定式作宾补。故去掉to。
8.考查副词。句意：她总是积极参加当地的音乐比赛。分析可知，此处应用副词actively作状语，修饰动词participates。故active改为actively。
9.考查动词时态及主谓一致。句意：到目前为止，她在我们城市已赢得了两项大奖。根据时间状语so far可知，句子应用现在完成时，主语she为单数，助动词应用has。故won前加has。
10.考查过去分词。句意：因此，在她的影响下，我们班越来越多的学生喜欢唱歌。分析可知，此处应用非谓语动词作状语，动词influence与其逻辑主语more and more students之间是动宾关系，故应用过去分词形式作状语。故influencing改为influenced。

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本题考查了"人际交往，记叙文，"，属于"易错题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

    Hanging her head down，Ruby felt so regretful for getting Ollie into trouble.___________
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