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The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
She was warm﹣hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face．I was homesick in the first few days，unable to adjust∧ the new school．It was with her help which I got familiar with the school．However，what impressed me most was her diligence and determine．When faced with a challenge in study，she would try out her best to solve it．Whenever I was in trouble，she would encourage myself and help me out．But for her encouragement，I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady．
Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me．May our friendship lasts forever．
解析：
1．that → whom．考查定语从句引导词．先行词deskmate（同桌）是表达人的名词，后面是"介词+关系代词"引导的定语从句，介词提前，应用关系代词whom．故将that 改为whom．
2．a → an．考查冠词．honest为元音音素开头的单词，应用不定冠词an．故将a 改为an．
3．adjust 后加to．考查固定短语．adjust to"适应于……"，固定短语．故在adjust 后加to．
4．which→ that．考查强调句．分析句子结构可知，本句为强调句，就方式状语with her help进行强调，句意：正是在她的帮助下，我才熟悉了这所学校．根据强调句结构"it is （was）+被强调成分+that （who）+其他"，连接词应用that．故将which改为that．
5．determine →determination．考查名词．and连接并列的表语，根据前面her diligence可知，此处应用名词determination"决心"．故将determine改为determination．
6．去掉out．考查固定短语．短语try one's best"尽某人最大努力"，故去掉out．
7．myself → me．考查代词．此处作动词encourage的宾语，指"鼓励我"，应用第一人称宾格形式me，故将myself 改为 me．
8．steady → steadily．考查副词．此处修饰动词progress，应用副词，故将steady 改为steadily．
9．Have →Having．考查非谓语动词．分析句子结构可知本句缺少主语，需用动名词短语作主语，故将Have 改为Having．
10．lasts → last．考查动词时态．句意：愿我们的友谊天长地久．may表示祝福或祝愿时，常用句型是：May+名词+动词原形+其它，故将lasts改为last．
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