假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请您修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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214333. （2020•长安区一中•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At lunch in the first day of my high school，I saw a girl sit alone.I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat.Late，we became close friends in following three years.One day，he shared something touching with me. "Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me，wearing a big smile？" she asked me. "I want you to know how much special you are.I was disappointing at that time，but your smile made my day，" she added.
I can't help smile each time I think of the scene，that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.

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日常生活，

[答案]

（1）in改为on （2）sit改为sitting （3）Late改为Later （4）在in后加the （5）he改为she （6）come改为came （7）删除much （8）disappointing改为disappointed （9）smile改为smiling （10）that改为which

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At lunch in the first day of my high school，I saw a girl sit alone.I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat. Late，we became close friends in∧following three years.One day， he shared something touching with me. "Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me，wearing a big smile？" she asked me."I want you to know how much special you are.I was disappointing at that time，but your smile made my day，" she added.I can't help smile each time I think of the scene， that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.
【详解】
（1）in改为on .考查介词。句意：在我上高中的第一天吃午饭的时候，我看见一个女孩独自坐着。由于"on the first day"中on是具体的日子，in是某一个时间段；句中表示具体的日子，用on。故将in改为on.
（2）sit改为sitting .考查现在分词。句意：我看见一个女孩独自坐着。根据短语"see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事"可知，sit应改为sitting。故将sit改为sitting.
（3）Late改为Later.考查副词。句意：后来，在接下来的三年里，我们成为了亲密的朋友。根据句意可知，在句中Later为时间副词，Late为形容词，故将Late改为Later.
（4）在in后加the .考查冠词。句意：后来，在接下来的三年里，我们成为了亲密的朋友。根据句意可知，句中指的是特定的时间"接下来的三年里"。故在in后加the.
（5）he改为she.考查人称代词。句意：有一天，她和我分享了一些感人的事情。根据上下文可知，她指的是女孩。故将he改为she.
（6）come改为came .考查时态。句意："你还记得那天，你来我家，坐在我旁边，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容吗？"。根据文章时态和句意可知，句中的那天（the day指的是上文提到的开学第一天）已经过去了，应用过去时态，come的过去式为came。故将come改为came.
（7）删除much.考查疑问词。句意："我想让你知道你有多特别。"根据句意可知，该句how表示程度"多么…"而how much意为"多少钱"，不符合句意。故将much删除。
（8）disappointing改为disappointed.考查形容词。句意：那时我非常失望。disappointed是形容词"感到失望的"常用来修饰人，所以把disappointing改为disappointed.
（9）smile改为smiling .考查固定短语。句意：每当我想起这一幕，我都会忍不住微笑。根据固定短语"can't help doing sth 忍不住做某事"可知，smile应该为smiling。故将smile改为smiling.
（10）that改为which.考查非限制性定语从句。句意：这表明一个简单的善举可以极大地改变我们的生活。分析句子可知，该句为非限制性定语从句，that不能做引导词，引导词在从句中做主语，指代前文the scene，应用which。故将that改为which.

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本题考查了"日常生活，"，属于"基础题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。

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