[答案]
1.在child前加a
2.being改为be
3.Therefore改为However
4.occur改为occurred
5.删除tosuffer中的to
6.am改为were
7.growing改为grew
8.what改为that
9.hardly改为hard
10.her改为my
[解析]
When I was ∧child,my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well﹣paid job.Therefore,what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood,I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor,I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up,I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career?Undoubtedly,being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
I will study hardly and make non﹣stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.
详解:
1.考查冠词。句意:当我还是个孩子的时候,我的父母希望我成为一个有高薪工作的成功人士。由child为单数名词可知,此处为表示泛指"一个孩子"为泛指概念,结合child为首音节辅音单词,所以在child前加不定冠词a。故在child前加a。
2.考查动词不定式。句意:当我还是个孩子的时候,我的父母希望我成为一个有高薪工作的成功人士。分析句子可知,此处为expect sb to do"期待某人做某事",为动词不定式作宾语补足语。故将being改为be。
3.考查副词。句意:然而,我最看重的是成就感。分析上下句句意可知,此处为副词However"然而"表示转折,符合句意逻辑关系。故将Therefore 改为However。
4.考查动词时态。句意:我第一次想到这个主意是在我看到我祖父头痛得厉害的时候。根据从句动词saw可知,此处主句谓语动词也应为一般过去时。故将occur改为occurred。
5.动词动词不定式的省略。句意:我第一次想到这个主意是在我看到我祖父头痛得厉害的时候。分析句子可知,此处为动词短语see sb do sth"看到某人做过某事"为整个事情的过程,用省略to的动词不定式作宾补。故删除to。
6.考查虚拟语气。句意:我想如果我是医生,我就能减轻他的痛苦。分析句子可知,此处为if引导的虚拟语气用法,根据句意可知,此处为对将来事实相反的假设,从句应为过去时。故将am改为were。
7.考查动词时态。句意:后来长大了,我读到了林巧稚的故事。分析句子可知,该句为as引导的时间状语从句,由主句动词came across可知,此处从句谓语动词也应为过去时。故将growing改为grew。
8.考查强调句型。句意:是她的坚韧不拔和无私奉献坚定了我的决心。分析句子可知,该句为it was…that…的强调句型,被强调部分her perseverance and selfless devotion为句子的主语成分。故将what改为that。
9.考查副词。句意:我会努力学习,努力追求自己的梦想,帮助需要帮助的人。此处为副词hard"努力"修饰动词study,hardly为"几乎不"的意思,与句意不符。故将hardly改为hard。
10.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:我会努力学习,努力追求自己的梦想,帮助需要帮助的人。根据句意以及前面的主语I可知,此处为代词偷换人称,应该为"追求我的梦想"符合句意。故将her改为my。
[点评]
本题考查了"学习,记叙文,",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。