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213749. （2023•高陵一中•高二下期中） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   When I was child，my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well-paid job.Therefore，what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood，I have dreamed of being a doctor.
   The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor，I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up，I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career？Undoubtedly，being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
   I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.
共享时间:2023-05-20 难度:2
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[考点]
学习，记叙文，
[答案]
1.在child前加a
2.being改为be
3.Therefore改为However
4.occur改为occurred
5.删除tosuffer中的to
6.am改为were
7.growing改为grew
8.what改为that
9.hardly改为hard
10.her改为my
[解析]
When I was ∧child，my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well﹣paid job.Therefore，what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood，I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor，I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up，I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career？Undoubtedly，being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
I will study hardly and make non﹣stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.
详解：
1.考查冠词。句意：当我还是个孩子的时候，我的父母希望我成为一个有高薪工作的成功人士。由child为单数名词可知，此处为表示泛指"一个孩子"为泛指概念，结合child为首音节辅音单词，所以在child前加不定冠词a。故在child前加a。
2.考查动词不定式。句意：当我还是个孩子的时候，我的父母希望我成为一个有高薪工作的成功人士。分析句子可知，此处为expect sb to do"期待某人做某事"，为动词不定式作宾语补足语。故将being改为be。
3.考查副词。句意：然而，我最看重的是成就感。分析上下句句意可知，此处为副词However"然而"表示转折，符合句意逻辑关系。故将Therefore 改为However。
4.考查动词时态。句意：我第一次想到这个主意是在我看到我祖父头痛得厉害的时候。根据从句动词saw可知，此处主句谓语动词也应为一般过去时。故将occur改为occurred。
5.动词动词不定式的省略。句意：我第一次想到这个主意是在我看到我祖父头痛得厉害的时候。分析句子可知，此处为动词短语see sb do sth"看到某人做过某事"为整个事情的过程，用省略to的动词不定式作宾补。故删除to。
6.考查虚拟语气。句意：我想如果我是医生，我就能减轻他的痛苦。分析句子可知，此处为if引导的虚拟语气用法，根据句意可知，此处为对将来事实相反的假设，从句应为过去时。故将am改为were。
7.考查动词时态。句意：后来长大了，我读到了林巧稚的故事。分析句子可知，该句为as引导的时间状语从句，由主句动词came across可知，此处从句谓语动词也应为过去时。故将growing改为grew。
8.考查强调句型。句意：是她的坚韧不拔和无私奉献坚定了我的决心。分析句子可知，该句为it was…that…的强调句型，被强调部分her perseverance and selfless devotion为句子的主语成分。故将what改为that。
9.考查副词。句意：我会努力学习，努力追求自己的梦想，帮助需要帮助的人。此处为副词hard"努力"修饰动词study，hardly为"几乎不"的意思，与句意不符。故将hardly改为hard。
10.考查形容词性物主代词。句意：我会努力学习，努力追求自己的梦想，帮助需要帮助的人。根据句意以及前面的主语I可知，此处为代词偷换人称，应该为"追求我的梦想"符合句意。故将her改为my。
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本题考查了"学习，记叙文，"，属于"易错题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。
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201764. （2024•西安中学•三模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago.There were only a handful of local shops and cafes，and everyone know their neighbors as there were only twenty thousands people in the whole town!My parents used to let my brother and me walking to and from the kindergarten every day，and we were allowed to do whichever we liked before dark.The only thing we had to worry about was getting bite by insects or getting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long!After high school，I went to college in the city，Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike.People from all over the world spoke languages I never heard before.There were huge department stores，where sold everything.The entertainment at all hours was my most favorite thing about the city.
共享时间:2024-04-15 难度:2 相似度:2
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202011. （2023•昆仑中学•二模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    I enjoy learning English but can remember individual words easy.However，when it comes to reading comprehension，it's really the challenge.Last weekend，I tried to read a storybook write in English to improve my reading.At first，I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word，which I found it not very helpful.I often felt puzzling about what I had read.Then I tried to finish a chapter completely with looking up the new words.What surprised me was I could understand the story merely from the context.I hope I will make great progresses in English in this way.
共享时间:2023-03-16 难度:2 相似度:2
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203490. （2015•师大附中•四模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或者修改．（从第11处开始不计分）（满分15分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    I'm a senior 3 student． The college entrance exam is on the way but everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different way． At school， all the teachers work very hard， encourage us to build up our confidence and inspiring us improve our study． Whenever we meet with difficulties， they are ready to come to our help． Meanwhile， our school also provides good facilities to us students， for an example the library stay open in the evenings and even on the weekends． At home， our parents take good care of us and make sure we are good fed so that we can always be full of energy．
    I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers． I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam． I am sure that with our encouragement and timely help I would be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．
共享时间:2015-04-28 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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220338. （2015•铁一中学•高三上二月） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（--），并在该词下面写出修改的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    This is Li Xia．I learned from your post that you wanted to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．As a student，I have been learned Mandarin for many years．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin．
    Learning Mandarin takes time，but if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin every day．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Beside，you can also read some books in Chinese，see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programme．Speaking and listening is very important for language learning，of which you are sure to make great progress．
    In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want to．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you could also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve my oral speaking．
    Hope for your early reply!
共享时间:2015-12-11 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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220216. （2018•交大附中•高二下一月） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词作斜线划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last night I was at a coffee shop．There was a wonderfully music show．As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie，I notice a middle-aged woman near me．Clearly，she had caught in a fire of some kind．His face was so badly burned that she looked very tight．I thought about how brave she was to come out but appeared in public．When I returned back to my seat，I turned towards the woman and said， "Isn't he a wonderful performers？" And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give．To my pleased，she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile for return．It was her smile which made her whole face light up last night．She was beautiful．
共享时间:2018-04-16 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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219894. （2019•西安中学•高三上一月） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
   It was Monday morning，and the writing class had just begin．Everyone was silent，wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud．Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity；others were nervous and anxious．I had done myself homework，but I way．I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people．At that moment，I remembered that my father once said， " The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks，and mistake as well．" Immediate，I raised my hand．
共享时间:2019-10-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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219832. （2020•高陵一中•高一上一月） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    Good morning，everyone!It is my great honour to be here to share you my opinions on how to learn well in school.Firstly we should learn to learn efficient.Personally，I used to trying useful methods to achieve my academic goals.Developing a good habit is also of great significant.It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involve in class，and review after lass.In addition，we should learn how to get along well with other.In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with my classmates.It is with sincerity and faithfulness what we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally，we should take a part in sports and outdoor activities frequently，which were really helpful to build up our strength but enrich our school life.
共享时间:2020-10-21 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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219622. （2020•长安区一中•高一上一月） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear friends，
    It is real a good chance to have met all of you here． We have spent several precious weekends in English study in the English Club． Although we have been member for a short period of time， we have made a great progress． That is why we are all very active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful． Besides， the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested． I am very pleased to say that all of us improved our spoken English greatly so far． I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
共享时间:2020-10-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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205847. （2017•西安中学•高二上期末） 英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加： 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧）， 并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改： 在错的词下划一横线， 并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意： 1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处， 多者（从11处起）不计分．
Dear Abby，
    How are you？ I've got a wonderful news to tell you． I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education． Three hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it， but only a few were chosen and I was one of them． Therefore， my parents are not happy about it． They are strong against my going there． They say it is too far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely and will not be used to the climate here． They can't imagine a young girl like me live alone． They advise me to study in the capital instead． Then I'll be able to continue living with them． How could I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up？
Yours，
Hanna
共享时间:2017-02-07 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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205758. （2018•西安一中•高一上期末） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you've been ill for days．How are you feeling now？
I know that you are devoting all your energy from study．But I just want to say exercises is as important as study．Do exercise will not waste your time．Instead，it can refresh your mind．After one and two hours' exercise，you can study more effective．Only when you have the strong body can we keep on studying without feeling uncomfortable．However your study will be affected by your health．
I hope you can take at least one hour's exercise each day before you recover from your illness．I wish you will be well soon．
Yours sincerely，
John
共享时间:2018-02-23 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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205475. （2020•未央区•高一上期末） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（?）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David，
    How time flies!It's been an entirely week since you left our school.You can't imagine what I miss the time we spent together.I am very happy to be your friends and grateful to your help with my English.I really got pleasure from speak English with you and it was the first time that I found it not difficult to learn English.Because of I have learned a lot from you，I am more confident of your future study.
    Although we are not in a same country now，our friendship will last forever.And I hope it will not be long before we met again.
Yours，
Li Hua
共享时间:2020-02-14 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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205103. （2022•蓝田县•高二下期末） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   Online learning has become an important way to learn recently.However，online learning have both advantages and disadvantages.
   Its advantages are obviously.It allows us learn at any time wherever we are.Besides，it is much more easier for us to absorb resources who are available online.However，its disadvantages cannot be ignoring.Staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to us eyes.Worse still，we don't have many opportunity to interact with teachers and classmates.
   Then how to be smart online learners？First，we should discuss problems with others courageously.Second，it is wise to take the short break after learning for half an hour.
   On conclusion，only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
共享时间:2022-07-22 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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205430. （2020•西安中学•高二下期末） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Bill，
    How time flies!I went back to school and begin my lesson last month．It will be ten months before I attend the College Entrance Examination，that makes me worried．I failed pass the English test last term because of I had difficulty with it．I will never give up and determine to give myself the second chance to pass them．I will ask my teachers and friends for advices on how to improve it and work out a detailed plan．Besides，I'll make fully use of time．Do you have any good ideas？Tell me or I will be grateful to you．
    I'm looking forward to hear from you．
Yours，
Li Hua
共享时间:2020-07-19 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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203289. （2016•华清中学•二模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are advantage for students to work while studying at school．One of them was that them can earn money．For the most part，students working to earn money for their own use．Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please．They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money．Some students may also to save up for our college or future use．
共享时间:2016-03-20 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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202249. （2022•临潼区•二模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加-一个漏字符号（ ?） ，并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   Yesterday morning，I go to school by bus.However，I didn't realize I had been left my bus cards at home until I got on the bus.With no money on me，I didn't know how to do.So I made an apology to the driver and was about to get of while a young lady stopped us.She offered to buy a ticket for me，say she had experienced such embarrassing thing.Seeing her sweet smile，I felt very happily and was really grateful for what she did.It was her kindness that I made up my mind to pass on to other.
共享时间:2022-03-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5
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