假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词作斜线划掉修改在错的词下面画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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220216. （2018•交大附中•高二下一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词作斜线划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last night I was at a coffee shop．There was a wonderfully music show．As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie，I notice a middle-aged woman near me．Clearly，she had caught in a fire of some kind．His face was so badly burned that she looked very tight．I thought about how brave she was to come out but appeared in public．When I returned back to my seat，I turned towards the woman and said， "Isn't he a wonderful performers？" And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give．To my pleased，she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile for return．It was her smile which made her whole face light up last night．She was beautiful．

共享时间:2018-04-16 难度:1

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Last night I was at a coffee shop．There was a wonderfully music show．As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie，I notice a middle﹣aged woman near me．Clearly，she had∧ caught in a fire of some kind． His face was so badly burned that she looked very tight．I thought about how brave she was to come out but appeared in public．When I returned ~~back~~ to my seat，I turned towards the woman and said， "Isn't he a wonderful performers？" And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give．To my pleased，she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile for return．It was her smile which made her whole face light up last night．She was beautiful．
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1．wonderfully改为wonderful．考查形容词．show是名词，要用形容词修饰．故wonderfully改为wonderful．
2．notice改为noticed．考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．故notice改为noticed．
3．caught前加been．考查动词语态．be caught in意为"陷入，卷入"，是固定搭配．故caught前加been．
4．His改为Her．考查代词．her指代前文提到的a middle﹣aged woman．故His改为Her．
5．but改为and．考查连词．根据句意我想她是多么勇敢，并且能出现在公众面前．前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非转折关系，用连词and．故 but改为and．
6．去掉back．考查词语用法．return包含有back，back是多余的，要去掉．故去掉back．
7．he改为it．考查代词．根据句意这不是很棒的演出吗？此处应使用代词it代指这位女士的表演，所以应用it，故 he改为it．
8．pleased改为pleasure．考查固定搭配．to one's pleasure意为"使某人高兴的是"，是固定搭配．故pleased改为pleasure．
9．for改为in．考查介词．in return意为"作为回报"，是固定搭配．故for改为in．
10．which改为that．考查强调句．英语强调句型：It is/ was + 被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+ that/ who（当强调主语且主语指人）+ 其他部分．故 which改为that．

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增加：在缺词处加-一个漏字符号（ ?），并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2022-03-18 难度:1 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2021-02-22 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
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共享时间:2023-11-10 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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213462. （2023•周至六中•高二下期中） Several years before，my friend and I would often drive to Chicago to pay a visit our other friends.After a couple of trips we noticed that there is a homeless man always sitting at a same exit of the subway.One day we brought some food with us and gave them to him.When he saw what we have brought for him，he became exciting with joy.After seeing his reaction，my friend and I decided to take up our action a little further.One night we packed up sandwiches and bottles of water，looking for people whom were in need.The look of joy on the face of each person we helped was one of the most amazing feeling in my life.

共享时间:2023-05-18 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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213567. （2022•未央区•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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Last week，my friend invited me to visit my hometown with her.I asked for my parents' permission，but they agreed.Leaving home for first time made me very happily.I was like a bird fly in the sky.But when the fourth day comes，I started to miss my parents.Especial when it was night time，the darkness made me to feel lonely.So I went home the next day.Through the experience，I begin to realize how a nice place the home is and that my parents are the loveliest persons.It is lucky for me to have so a happy family.

共享时间:2022-11-17 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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共享时间:2022-11-18 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2023-05-20 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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共享时间:2022-11-10 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2022-07-01 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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218579. （2022•雁塔二中•高二上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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共享时间:2022-10-25 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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218617. （2023•关山中学•高二上三月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2023-01-25 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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共享时间:2022-12-27 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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219404. （2021•鄠邑二中•高二上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2021-12-15 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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共享时间:2021-12-24 难度:2 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday night，I made my favorite lunch and stored it in the refrigerator.When I go to take it out the next morning，it was gone!Mom asked my brother，but he said he didn't take your lunch.I would have let it go，so the next morning my lunch was missing again!Mom wanted find out that was happening.That night，at the dinner table she told Dad about everything so that he could helped solve the problem.Dad's face sudden turned red.He then cleared his throat and said，"Oh，those lunches weren't for me？I thought you were saving me time by get my lunch ready，because of I've been going to work at five in the morning."
Our mouths dropped open in surprised and then we all started laughing.

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