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Dear Abby,
How are you? I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have∧ offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Three hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there. They say it is too far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely and will not be used to the climate here. They can't imagine a young girl like me live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with them. How could I persuade them to accept the fact∧ I have grown up?
Yours,
Hanna
解析1.去掉a.考查冠词.根据句子结构分析,后面名词news是不可数名词,前面不能用不定冠词,故去掉a.
2.在have与offered之间加been.考查被动语态.根据句意可知,此处表达"我被提供一个奖学金"之意,故在have与offered之间加been.
3.将hundreds改为hundred. 考查数词.根据句子结构分析,前面有具体数字three,后面数词用原形即可,故将hundreds改为hundred.
4.将Therefore改为However/Nevertheless.考查副词.根据句意可知, 有三百二十名学生参加了这次考试,但只有少数人被选中,我也是其中之一,但我的父母对此并不满意.此处表达转折关系,应该用However/Nevertheless然而,故将Therefore改为However/Nevertheless.
5.将strong改为strongly.考查副词.根据句子结构分析,此处修饰they are against句子用副词形式,strongly强烈地,符合题意,故将strong改为strongly.
6.将too改为so.考查固定结构.根据句子结构可知,此句为so…that结果状语从句,他们说,到目前为止,他们一整年都看不见我,他们担心我会感到孤独,不会适应那里的气候.故将too改为so.
7.将here改为there.考查副词.根据语境可知,他们说,到目前为止,他们一整年都看不见我,他们担心我会感到孤独,不会适应那里的气候.此处表达"那里"之意,故将here改为there.
8.将live改为living.考查动名词.根据句子结构分析,imagine后面接动名词或动名词复合结构,故.将live改为living.
9.将could改为can.考查情态动词.根据上文可知,此处应该用一般现在时态,can符合题意,故将could改为can.
10.在fact后面加that.考查同位语从句.根据句子结构分析,后面从句I have grown up是前面名词fact的具体内容,用that引导,故在fact后面加that.