[解析]
It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just begin.Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager ∧take part in the class activity;others were nervous and anxious.I had done myself homework,but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said" The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks,andmistake as well. Immediate,I raised my hand.
1.begin改为begun,考查时态,用过去分词和had构成过去完成时态.
2.wait改为waiting,考查现在分词,句子主语和wait自己是主动关系,所以用现在分词作状语.
3.and改为or,考查连词,表示他或她的,所以用or连接.
4.eager后面加to,考查固定搭配,be eager to do sth急切地想做某事.
5.myself改为my,考查形容词性物主代词,修饰名词用形容词性物主代词.
6.去掉that,考查固定搭配,be afraid to do sth不敢做某事.
7.larger改为large,考查形容词,a large group of people一大群人.
8.include改为includes,考查主谓一致,主语为that,所以用第三人称单数谓语.
9.mistake改为mistakes,考查名词的数,mistake为可数名词,所以用复数泛指.
10.immediate改为immediately,考查副词,修饰动词用副词.