[解析]
Dear Bill,
How time flies!I went back to school and begin my lesson last month.It will be ten months before I attend the College Entrance Examination,that makes me worried.I failed∧pass the English test last term because of I had difficulty with it.I will never give up and determine to give myself the second chance to pass them.I will ask my teachers and friends for advices on how to improve it and work out a detailed plan.Besides,I'll make fully use of time.Do you have any good ideas?Tell me or I will be grateful to you.
I'm looking forward to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
详解:
1.begin改为began 考查动词时态.根据时间状语last month,要用一般过去式.
2.that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which,that不可用于非限制性定语从句中.
3.加to 考查动词不定式.fail to do sth.意为"未能做某事",是固定搭配.
4.去掉of 考查词语用法.because意为"因为",是连词,连接两个句子构成原因状语从句;because of意为"因为",是介词,接名词或代词.此处是前者.
5.the改为a 考查冠词.序数词前加不定冠词a表示"又一,再一".
6.them改为it 考查代词.it指代the English test.
7.advices改为advice 考查名词.advice是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
8.fully改为full 考查固定搭配.make full use of意为"充分利用",是固定搭配.
9.or改为and 考查连词."祈使句+and+陈述句"句型结构中,前一分句表示一种条件或假设,相当于if条件状语从句,后一分句表示一种结果或推论.
10.hear改为hearing 考查动名词.to是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.