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I have many friends really worth mentioned,but my best friend is Li Mei.We have much in common in much aspects,such as hobby and thoughts.I think this is the foundation of us friendship.If she is not tall,she is very pretty.She always wear a smile and gives us the impression that she is kind and easy﹣going.Actual she is shy.Besides,she is very clever.She not only does well ∧every subject but also takes part in many after﹣class activities.I really admire her.She is always willing to help me,that makes me to feel very grateful.I really value our friendship and I hope it will last forever.
详解:
1.mention﹣﹣﹣mentioning.考查非谓语动词.worth用动名词做宾语,表示"值得做某事",所以mention改为 mentioning.
2.many﹣﹣﹣much.考查固定短语.在固定短语have…in common 里,表示"有许多共同之处"用much或a lot.
3.hobby﹣﹣﹣hobbies.考查名词.hobby是可数名词,人们的爱好不可能只有一个,所以和thoughts并列,用hobby的复数 hobbies.
4.us﹣﹣our.考查代词.修饰名词 friendship用形容词性物主代词,用our,表示"我们的友谊".
5.if改成Though/Although.考查连词. Although she is not tall引导让步状语从句尽管她个子不高,但是很漂亮.
6.wear﹣﹣﹣wears.考查谓语动词的形式.本句讨论的是现在的事,而且主语是She,所以谓语动词用wear的第三人称单数wears.
7.Actual﹣﹣﹣Actually.考查副词的用法.修饰句子she is very clever用副词Actually.
8.well 后加in.考查介词.固定短语do well in表示"某事做的好".
9.that﹣﹣﹣which.考查非限制性定语从句的关系词.引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句she is always willing to help me,用which.
10、 去掉to.make sb do是固定结构"让某人做某事".