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I'm a senior 3 student. The college entrance exam is on the way but everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different way. At school, all the teachers work very hard, encourage us to build up our confidence and inspiring us ∧ improve our study. Whenever we meet with difficulties, they are ready to come to our help. Meanwhile, our school also provides good facilities to us students, for an example the library stay open in the evenings and even on the weekends. At home, our parents take good care of us and make sure we are good fed so that we can always be full of energy.
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers. I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam. I am sure that with our encouragement and timely help I would be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future.
详解:
1. but改为and.考查连词.前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非转折关系,用连词and.
2. way改为ways.考查名词复数.way是可数名词,其前有different修饰时要用复数形式.
3. encourage改为encouraging.考查现在分词.all the teachers与encourage之间是主谓关系,用现在分词作状语.
4. 加to.考查动词不定式.inspire sb to do sth.意为"激励某人做某事",动词不定式作宾语补足语.
5. to改为for.考查固定搭配.provide …for意为"提供 …",是固定搭配.
6. 去掉an.考查固定搭配.for example意为"例如",是固定搭配.
7. stay改为stays.考查主谓一致.主语the library是单数,谓语动词也应用单数形式.
8. good改为well.考查副词.feed是动词,要用副词修饰.
9. our改为their.考查代词.their指代前文提到的our parents and teachers.
10. would改为will.考查动词时态.根据时间状语 in the near future,要用一般将来时态.