[解析]
Dear Jennifer,
I'm truly delighted to learn that you have won the first prize in your school's Chinese traditional culture quiz last week! I'm writing to congratulate you for your success from the bottoms of my heart.
I know that you have always been interesting in Chinese traditional culture since you came to China. Learning Chinese is not easy for you, and you keep on studying hardly. In fact that impresses me most is your attitude to learning. It is no doubt that your hard work has helped you to become such ∧ great success.I'm sure you'll have even great achievements in your future studies.
详解:
(1)去掉have.考查动词时态.句意:我真的很高兴得知你上周在学校中国传统文化测试中获得一等奖.根据时间状语last week要用一般过去时.故去掉have.
(2)for改为on.考查介词.句意:我写这封信是从心底祝贺你的成功.congratulate sb. on sth.为某事向某人祝贺,是固定搭配.故for改为on.
(3)bottoms改为bottom.考查固定搭配.句意:我写这封信是从心底祝贺你的成功.from the bottom of one's heart衷心地,是固定搭配.故bottoms改为bottom.
(4)interesting改为interested.考查固定搭配.句意:我知道自从你来到中国以来,你一直对中国传统文化感兴趣.be interested in对 …感兴趣,是固定搭配.故interesting改为interested.
(5)and改为but.考查连词.句意:但你一直努力学习.前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系,用连词but.故and改为but.
(6)hardly改为hard.考查副词.句意:但你一直努力学习.hardly意为"几乎不",hard意为"努力地",此处应是:努力地.故hardly改为hard.
(7)that改为what.考查连词.句意:事实上给我印象最深的是你对学习的态度.主语从句中缺少主语,用what作主语,同时引导主语从句.故that改为what.
(8)It改为There.考查固定搭配.句意:不容置疑努力学习帮你变成了一个如此伟大的成功人士.There is no doubt that……是一个句型,意为"不容置疑……".故It改为There.
(9)such后加a.考查不定冠词.句意:不容置疑努力学习帮你变成了一个如此伟大的成功人士.success意为"成功的人",是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.故such后加a.
(10)great改为greater.考查形容词比较级.句意:我确信在未来的学习中你会取得更大的成就的.暗指现在与未来相比,要用形容词比较级.故great改为greater.