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Dear Mr.Johnson,
I'm more than happy to learn that you want your 6﹣year﹣old daughter ∧ learn Chinese.Here I'd like to recommend a well﹣known language school in our city ﹣ Yangming Language School.
The language school, that has over ten years of experience in teaching foreign students Chinese, receiving students from all over the world,regardless of their educational level and background. It's courses includes Chinese culture,everyday communication and speaking Chinese.All the teachers there have developed a special method such that they can make their classes lively and interesting.The students are encouraging to use Chinese in their daily life.Consequently,many foreign students can use Chinese free when they leave school.
I hope you can take my recommendation into considering.If you need to know anything else,do not hesitate to contact with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
详解:
1.daughter后加to.考查动词不定式.want sb.to do sth.意为"想要某人做某事",动词不定式作宾语补足语.
2.that改为which.考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词language school在从句中作主语,用关系代词which,that不可用于非限制性定语从句中.
3.receiving改为receives.考查句子结构.which has over ten years of experience in teaching foreign students Chinese是定语从句,句中缺少谓语动词,主语language school是单数,且表示一般事实,谓语动词用一般现在时的单数形式.
4.It's改为Its.考查句子结构.It's=It is,主语courses前应用形容词性物主代词its.
5.speaking改为spoken.考查过去分词."汉语口语"用英语表达应是:spoken Chinese.
6.such改为so.考查词语用法.such that 连在一起时,这里such是代词,不是形容词,that 引导的是such的同位语从句,这里的such that 根本不是一般的"如此……以至于……"的解释;so that意为"以至于;以便",引导目的状语从句或结果状语从句,此处应是后者.
7.encouraging改为encouraged.考查动词语态.students与encourage之间是动宾关系,用一般现在时的被动语态.
8.free改为freely.考查副词.use是动词,要用副词修饰.
9.considering改为consideration.考查固定搭配.take sth.into consideration意为"顾及到某事,考虑到某事",是固定搭配.
10.去掉with.考查词语用法.contact是及物动词,后接宾语是不需要介词with.