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The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate,with that I fell in love at first sight.
She was warm﹣hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face.I was homesick in the first few days,unable to adjust∧ the new school.It was with her help which I got familiar with the school.However,what impressed me most was her diligence and determine.When faced with a challenge in study,she would try out her best to solve it.Whenever I was in trouble,she would encourage myself and help me out.But for her encouragement,I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady.
Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me.May our friendship lasts forever.
解析:
1.that → whom.考查定语从句引导词.先行词deskmate(同桌)是表达人的名词,后面是"介词+关系代词"引导的定语从句,介词提前,应用关系代词whom.故将that 改为whom.
2.a → an.考查冠词.honest为元音音素开头的单词,应用不定冠词an.故将a 改为an.
3.adjust 后加to.考查固定短语.adjust to"适应于……",固定短语.故在adjust 后加to.
4.which→ that.考查强调句.分析句子结构可知,本句为强调句,就方式状语with her help进行强调,句意:正是在她的帮助下,我才熟悉了这所学校.根据强调句结构"it is (was)+被强调成分+that (who)+其他",连接词应用that.故将which改为that.
5.determine →determination.考查名词.and连接并列的表语,根据前面her diligence可知,此处应用名词determination"决心".故将determine改为determination.
6.去掉out.考查固定短语.短语try one's best"尽某人最大努力",故去掉out.
7.myself → me.考查代词.此处作动词encourage的宾语,指"鼓励我",应用第一人称宾格形式me,故将myself 改为 me.
8.steady → steadily.考查副词.此处修饰动词progress,应用副词,故将steady 改为steadily.
9.Have →Having.考查非谓语动词.分析句子结构可知本句缺少主语,需用动名词短语作主语,故将Have 改为Having.
10.lasts → last.考查动词时态.句意:愿我们的友谊天长地久.may表示祝福或祝愿时,常用句型是:May+名词+动词原形+其它,故将lasts改为last.