假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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213567. （2022•未央区•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week，my friend invited me to visit my hometown with her.I asked for my parents' permission，but they agreed.Leaving home for first time made me very happily.I was like a bird fly in the sky.But when the fourth day comes，I started to miss my parents.Especial when it was night time，the darkness made me to feel lonely.So I went home the next day.Through the experience，I begin to realize how a nice place the home is and that my parents are the loveliest persons.It is lucky for me to have so a happy family.

共享时间:2022-11-17 难度:2

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品行与态度，记叙文，

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1.my改为her；2.but改为and；3.在first前加the；4.happily改为happy；5.fly改为flying；6.comes改为came；7.especial改为especially；8.去掉feel前的to；9.how改为what；10.so改为such.

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Last week，my friend invited me to visit my hometown with her.I asked for my parents' permission，but they agreed.Leaving home for ∧first time made me very happily.I was like a bird fly in the sky.But when the fourth day comes，I started to miss my parents.Especial when it was night time，the darkness made me to feel lonely.So I went home the next day.Through the experience，I begin to realize how a nice place the home is and that my parents are the loveliest persons.It is lucky for me to have so a happy family.
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1.考查代词。句意：上周，我的朋友邀请我和她一起去参观她的家乡。根据句意及后文her可知，此处指朋友邀请作者去参观她的家乡，故应用her。故my改为her。
2.考查连词。句意：我征求了父母的同意，他们同意了。根据句意可知，前后文之间是顺接关系而不是转折关系。故but改为and。
3.考查冠词。句意：第一次离家让我很开心。序数词first前应加定冠词the，for the first time"第一次"。故在first前加the。
4.考查形容词。句意：第一次离家让我很开心。分析可知，此处应用形容词作宾语补足语。故happily改为happy。
5.考查现在分词。句意：我就像一只在天空飞翔的鸟。分析可知，此处应用非谓语形式作后置定语，bird和fly之间是逻辑上的主动关系，故应用现在分词形式作定语。故fly改为flying。
6.考查动词时态。句意：但是当第4天来临的时候，我开始想念我的父母。结合前文时间状语last week可知，文章是在叙述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故comes改为came。
7.考查副词。句意：尤其是在夜晚，黑暗让我感到孤独。分析可知，此处应用副词especially作状语，修饰后文时间状语从句。故especial改为especially。
8.考查动词不定式。句意：尤其是在夜晚，黑暗让我感到孤独。根据句意表示"使某人做某事"应用make sb.do sth，故此处应用省略to的不定式作宾语补足语。故去掉feel前的to。
9.考查感叹句。句意：通过这次经历，我开始意识到家是一个多么好的地方，我的父母是最可爱的人。分析可知，此处为感叹句。根据句中名词a nice place可知，此处应用what引导该感叹句，其句型为"what+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数+主语+谓语"。故how改为what。
10.考查固定搭配。句意：我很幸运有一个如此幸福的家庭。根据后文的a happy family可知，此处应用such，构成"such+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数"，so后应用形容词，其结构为"so+形容词+a/an+可数名词单数"。故so改为such。

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共享时间:2022-11-10 难度:2 相似度:2

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202087. （2022•西安中学•六模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2022-05-18 难度:2 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加-一个漏字符号（ ?），并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2022-03-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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共享时间:2018-05-22 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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注意：
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共享时间:2023-07-10 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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   I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.

共享时间:2023-05-20 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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共享时间:2022-11-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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共享时间:2023-05-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
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共享时间:2023-11-10 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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共享时间:2021-02-22 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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Dear Jason，
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    Thanks again for your kind invitation.It would be high appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

共享时间:2022-03-02 难度:2 相似度:1

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204814. （2022•周至四中•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2022-07-01 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sandy was one of my good friends at high school.At that time，we often spend time together，sharing happiness but sadness as well.It was with her help that I made a great progress in my study.Last year，she decided study abroad.In other words，we would be separated for a long time.Before she left，I sent a gift to show my best wishes to him.And she gave me an English book what is about the grammar.Since then，we have kept in contact in each other through e-mails.I think high of the friendship between us and look forward to see her again in the near future.

共享时间:2022-02-26 难度:2 相似度:1

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204675. （2023•西安高级中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a middle-school student，I love to do the exercise with my classmates.Doing different kinds of exercise are good for our health.After class，I'd like to play football with my friends.We usual play it for two hours.Sometimes we win，sometimes we lose，and it doesn't matter.We always have a good time that we play football.Doing exercise makes me strong than before and I make a lot good friends.Now I am the captain of the school's team.When I grew up，I want to play football in the name of our countries and win the championship.I hope my dream will come truth one day.

共享时间:2023-07-04 难度:2 相似度:1

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204579. （2023•鄠邑区•高二上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thank you for your letter，what really made me happy.I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I'm surely you'll have a good time.Actually，I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old，for I have long been out of practice.Luckily，I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again，such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner.

共享时间:2023-02-02 难度:2 相似度:1

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2022-11-17

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