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220085. （2019•高新一中•高一下一月）短文改错
One day，my cousin told me about the importance of protect the environment.He asked me help do it，too.I just said， "I don't think my help is important." Hear what I said，he was asked， "How much does a snowflake weigh？" I reply that it almost weighed nothing.Then he said， "I once read the story.There were 8865219 snowflakes on a tiny branch.When the 8865220^th fell into it，it broke." I got his point and decided to do that I can to help protect the environment.Unless your effort doesn't mean anything to the environment，think of the 8865220^th snowflakes.

共享时间:2019-04-26 难度:2

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品行与态度，记叙文，

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（1）protect改为protecting（2）me后加to（3）Hear改为Hearing（4）去掉was（5）reply改为replied（6）the改为a（7）into改为onto（8）that改为what（9）（10）snowflakes改为snowflake

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One day，my cousin told me about the importance of protect the environment.He asked me ∧help do it，too.I just said， "I don't think my help is important." Hear what I said，he ~~was~~ asked， "How much does a snowflake weigh？" I reply that it almost weighed nothing.Then he said， "I once read the story.There were 8865219 snowflakes on a tiny branch.When the 8865220^th fell into it，it broke." I got his point and decided to do that I can to help protect the environment.Unless your effort doesn't mean anything to the environment，think of the 8865220^th snowflakes.
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（1）考查。句意：有一天，我的表弟告诉我保护环境的重要性。介词of后面用动名词做宾语，故protect改为protecting。
（2）考查。句意：他也让我帮忙。我只是说"我觉得我的帮助不重要。"ask sb.to do sth."请求某人做某事"，故me后加to。
（3）考查。句意：听到我的话，他问道："一片雪花有多重？"hear和主语之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作状语，故Hear改为Hearing。
（4）考查。句意：听到我的话，他问道："一片雪花有多重？"此处是主动语态，不是被动语态，故去掉was。
（5）考查。句意：我回答说它几乎不重。描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时态，故reply改为replied。
（6）考查。句意：我曾经读过一个故事。泛指一个，所以用不定冠词，故the改为a。
（7）考查。句意：一根小树枝上有8865219片雪花。当第8865220片掉到上面的时候，它就碎了。fall onto"落到……上面"，故into改为onto。
（8）考查。句意：我明白了他的意思，决定尽我所能来帮助保护环境。引导宾语从句，在从句中作宾语，表示"……的事情"，所以用what引导，that不作成分无含义，故that改为what。
（9）考查。句意：如果你的努力对环境没有任何意义，想想第8865220朵雪花。此处是条件状语从句，意思是"如果"，而不是"除非"，故Unless改为If。
（10）考查。句意：如果你的努力对环境没有任何意义，想想第8865220朵雪花。前面是序数词，所以这里的名词应该用单数形式，故snowflakes改为snowflake。

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共享时间:2022-11-10 难度:2 相似度:2

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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共享时间:2022-06-22 难度:2 相似度:2

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共享时间:2022-11-17 难度:2 相似度:2

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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共享时间:2018-05-22 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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共享时间:2022-03-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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删除：把多余的词作斜线划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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共享时间:2018-04-16 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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注意：
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2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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共享时间:2022-10-25 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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I was frightening in my first class in the US.It was my first time to sit with so much foreigners in one classroom.Unlike other classmates，I sat quietly by me.My teacher spoke very fast and I have a hard time understanding him.Though I was a newcomer in a foreign country，communicating with these foreigners was really difficulty.Therefore，I had to try to understand what they were talking about in class.But reading and writing was even harder than listening and speaking.Just one month after the school started，I had to read book and write long papers，all English.That's when the real disaster to began.

共享时间:2023-01-25 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2022-07-01 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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共享时间:2022-12-27 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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Thank you for your letter，what really made me happy.I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I'm surely you'll have a good time.Actually，I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old，for I have long been out of practice.Luckily，I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again，such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner.

共享时间:2021-12-15 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   When I was child，my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well-paid job.Therefore，what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood，I have dreamed of being a doctor.
   The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor，I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up，I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career？Undoubtedly，being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
   I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.

共享时间:2023-05-20 难度:2 相似度:1

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213730. （2022•高新一中•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I do like to do all kinds of sports.But among a various of sports，I definitely have a preference to basketball，which is also a common choice for most of us.
    Widely acknowledging as the most interesting sport，basketball has made a great difference to my life.First of all，playing basketball contribute to physical and mental health，enabling him to pursue excellence in study.However，it plays a significant role in promoting teamwork，that is vital to the growth of a person.Last but not least，under no circumstances I fail to mention that playing basketball helps me build up my confidence and keeps me in high spirit.
    In short，my most favorite sport is basketball.I will keep playing it for its advantages.

共享时间:2022-11-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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219483. （2021•铁一中学•高一上二月） One day，I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ，people were chatting with English.I try to chat with some of them.To my surprised，I found the oral English of some junior students were better than mine.I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ.But every day after that，I would spend one hour practise my oral English：on-QQ.Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions.With time went by，I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

共享时间:2021-12-24 难度:2 相似度:1

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