[答案]
1.excited改为excitedly;2.Attracting改为Attracted;3.photo改为photos;4.在wait后加to;5.see改为saw;6.when改为that;7.but改为and;8.such改为so;9.删掉of;10.both改为all.
[解析]
This morning,when I looked out of the window,I excited found it was snowing heavily.Attracting by the beautiful sight,I decided to go out to take some photo.The snow finally stopped at noon,and I couldn't wait ∧go outside with my camera.As I walked on the path in front of our building,I see a boy suddenly slip on the snow﹣covered ground.It was at that moment when I realized what I should do.Immediately,I ran back home to get a broom but started to sweep the path.I worked such hard that I sweated a lot of.An hour later,the thick snow was cleared away.Looking at the clean path,my neighbors both smiled and gave me thumbs up.I felt happy that I did something for my neighborhood.
详解:
1.考查副词。句意:今天早上,当我看向窗外时,我兴奋地发现雪下得很大。分析可知,此处修饰动词found,应用副词形式作状语。故excited改为excitedly。
2.考查过去分词。句意:被这美丽的景色所吸引,我决定出去拍一些照片。句子主语I与动词attract之间为逻辑上的被动关系,故此处应用过去分词形式作原因状语。故Attracting改为Attracted。
3.考查可数名词复数。句意:被这美丽的景色所吸引,我决定出去拍一些照片。photo"照片"为可数名词,根据前面的修饰词some可知,此处应用其复数形式。故photo改为photos。
4.考查动词不定式。句意:雪终于在中午停了,我迫不及待地带着相机出门。can't wait to do sth.意为"迫不及待地做某事",故此处应用to do不定式作宾语。故在wait后加to。
5.考查动词时态。句意:当我走在我们楼前的小路上时,我看到一个男孩突然在白雪覆盖的地面上滑倒了。根据上下文可知,文章是在叙述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故see改为saw。
6.考查强调句型。句意:就在那一刻我意识到我应该什么。分析可知,句子使用了强调句型,强调句型的基本结构为"it is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他",结合语境可知,此处强调时间状语at that moment,应用that。故when改为that。
7.考查连词。句意:我立刻跑回家拿扫帚开始扫小路。结合句意可知,两个动作之间是顺承关系,应用并列连词and。故but改为and。
8.考查副词。句意:我干得很卖力,以至于出了很多汗。分析可知,此处为"so...that..."句型,修饰副词hard应用副词so,such修饰名词。故such改为so。
9.考查副词。句意:我干得很卖力,以至于出了很多汗。修饰动词sweated应用程度副词a lot,a lot of"许多",其后应接名词。故删掉of。
10.考查代词。句意:看着干净的道路,我的邻居都笑了,对我竖起大拇指。结合语境可知,作者的邻居应有许多,表示三者或三者以上应用代词all,both意为"两者都",不符合题意。故both改为all。
[点评]
本题考查了"日常生活,记叙文,",属于"必考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。