假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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213730. （2022•高新一中•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I do like to do all kinds of sports.But among a various of sports，I definitely have a preference to basketball，which is also a common choice for most of us.
    Widely acknowledging as the most interesting sport，basketball has made a great difference to my life.First of all，playing basketball contribute to physical and mental health，enabling him to pursue excellence in study.However，it plays a significant role in promoting teamwork，that is vital to the growth of a person.Last but not least，under no circumstances I fail to mention that playing basketball helps me build up my confidence and keeps me in high spirit.
    In short，my most favorite sport is basketball.I will keep playing it for its advantages.

共享时间:2022-11-18 难度:2

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体育，记叙文，

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1.various改为variety；2.to改为for；3.acknowledging改为acknowledged；4.contribute改为contributes；5.him改为me；6.However改为Besides；7.that改为which；8.在circumstances后加do；9.spirit改为spirits；10.去掉most.

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I do like to do all kinds of sports.But among a various of sports，I definitely have a preference to basketball，which is also a common choice for most of us.
Widely acknowledging as the most interesting sport，basketball has made a great difference to my life.First of all，playing basketball contribute to physical and mental health，enabling him to pursue excellence in study.However，it plays a significant role in promoting teamwork，that is vital to the growth of a person.Last but not least，under no circumstances∧ I fail to mention that playing basketball helps me build up my confidence and keeps me in high spirit.
In short，my ~~most~~ favorite sport is basketball.I will keep playing it for its advantages.
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1.考查固定短语。句意：但在各种运动中，我绝对偏爱篮球，这也是我们大多数人的共同选择。a variety of意为"各种各样的"，为固定短语。故various改为variety。
2.考查介词。句意：但在各种运动中，我绝对偏爱篮球，这也是我们大多数人的共同选择。have a preference for sth意为"偏爱某物"，为固定搭配。故to改为for。
3.考查过去分词。句意：篮球被广泛认为是最有趣的运动，对我的生活产生了巨大的影响。分析句子结构可知，此处应用非谓语动词作状语，且acknowledge与其逻辑主语basketball之间为被动关系，故此处应用过去分词作状语。故acknowledging改为acknowledged。
4.考查主谓一致。句意：首先，打篮球有助于身心健康，使我能够在学习中追求卓越。分析句子结构可知，playing basketball为动名词短语作主语，故谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式，故contribute改为contributes。
5.考查代词。句意：首先，打篮球有助于身心健康，使我能够在学习中追求卓越。根据前文basketball has made a great difference to my life可知，此处指的是作者自己，故应用me表示"我"，故him改为me。
6.考查连词。句意：此外，它在促进团队合作方面起着重要作用，这对一个人的成长至关重要。根据句意可知，前后文之间为递进关系，而非转折关系。故However改为Besides。
7.考查定语从句的关系词。句意：此外，它在促进团队合作方面起着重要作用，这对一个人的成长至关重要。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为teamwork，指物，在从句中作主语，故应用which来引导，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故that改为which。
8.考查部分倒装。句意：最后但同样重要的一点是，在任何情况下，我都必须要说的是打篮球可以帮助我建立信心，让我保持高昂的精神状态。含否定词的介词短语under no circumstances位于句首时，后面的句子要用部分倒装，即将该句子助动词提到主语的前面，结合上下文可知，文章是在陈述事实，应用一般现在时，主语为I，故助动词应用do。故在circumstances后加do。
9.考查固定短语。句意：最后但同样重要的一点是，在任何情况下，我都必须要说的是打篮球可以帮助我建立信心，让我保持情绪激昂。in high spirits意为"情绪激昂"，为固定短语。故spirit改为spirits。
10.考查形容词最高级。句意：总而言之，我最喜欢的运动是篮球。形容词favorite意为"最喜欢的"，本身已带有最高级的含义，其前不需要再加most。故去掉most。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week，my friend invited me to visit my hometown with her.I asked for my parents' permission，but they agreed.Leaving home for first time made me very happily.I was like a bird fly in the sky.But when the fourth day comes，I started to miss my parents.Especial when it was night time，the darkness made me to feel lonely.So I went home the next day.Through the experience，I begin to realize how a nice place the home is and that my parents are the loveliest persons.It is lucky for me to have so a happy family.

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213749. （2023•高陵一中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   When I was child，my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well-paid job.Therefore，what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood，I have dreamed of being a doctor.
   The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor，I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up，I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career？Undoubtedly，being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
   I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.

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213797. （2022•西安三中•高二上期中） Of all my hobby，gardening is the one that makes me particular happy.I have a little yard behind my house，where I grow up all kinds of fruits and vegetables.In each season，I can see the variety of flowers in my yard.Summer is the time where watermelons grow in and out of my small yard.Tomatoes are also seeing among the others.I wake up early every morning in order take care of my fruits and vegetables.It is an interested job to remove both weeds but other plants that disturb the growth of my fruits and vegetables.Actually，so far I have only tell about my back yard.

共享时间:2022-11-10 难度:2 相似度:1

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