[解析]
Mistakes are unavoidable in life.But attitudes towards it may make a difference.
I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In a beginning,I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes.Before long my teacher got to know about my situation.He encouraged me to speak out that I thought.Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging,my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I must have avoided them.I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak.Practice made perfect.Now I can talk fluent in English.
Just as the saying goes, "Every bean has its black." Don't ∧ afraid of making mistakes,because success is just waiting for us.
详解:
1.it改为them.考查代词.them指代前文中的mistakes.
2.a改为the.考查固定搭配,in the beginning意为"",是固定搭配.
3.make改为making.考查动名词.avoid后接动词时要用动名词形式.
4.that改为what.考查连词.think是及物动词,用what作其宾语,同时引导宾语从句.
5.discouraging改为discouraged.考查过去分词.过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
6.must改为could.考查情态动词."must+have done"表示"对过去发生的事情的肯定推测","could have done"意为"本来可以做某事",此处应是后者.
7.去掉in.考查词语用法.join in指"参加某项活动",join指"加入某个组织",此处应是后者.
8.made改为makes.考查动词时态.Practice makes perfect是习语,意为"熟能生巧",表示一般事实,要用一般现在时的单数形式.
9.fluent改为fluently.考查副词.talk是动词,要用副词修饰.
10.加be.考查句子结构.句中缺少谓语动词,加be构成系表结构.