假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201907. （2024•长安区•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
By cycling you can not only enjoy the sights along the way but also can exercise your muscles or burn your fat.You can probable burn a lot of calories if you go for one-hour bicycling trip.If weight loss is your objection，one pound a week is beneficial.People who lost weight quickly are likely regain weight within the first year.
If cycling is part of our life，it is not necessary to give up sugar and coffee at a same time.Besides，a healthy diet is of great important as well.Eating fruit and vegetable can fuel your body on your cycling trips.If you cycle every day along with healthy eating，you will feel much more healthier.

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By cycling you can not only enjoy the sights along the way but also can exercise your muscles or burn your fat.You can probable burn a lot of calories if you go for∧ one﹣hour bicycling trip.If weight loss is your objection，one pound a week is beneficial.People who lost weight quickly are likely∧ regain weight within the first year.
If cycling is part of our life，it is ~~not~~ necessary to give up sugar and coffee at a same time.Besides，a healthy diet is of great important as well.Eating fruit and vegetable can fuel your body on your cycling trips.If you cycle every day along with healthy eating，you will feel much ~~more~~ healthier.
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（1）考查并列连词。句意：骑自行车，你不仅可以欣赏沿途的风景，还可以锻炼肌肉，燃烧脂肪。根据句意可知，exercise your muscles和burn your fat是并列关系，不是选择关系，要用and连接。故or改为and。
（2）考查副词。句意：如果你进行一个小时的自行车旅行，你可能会燃烧很多卡路里。修饰谓语动词的是副词，probable意思是"可能的"，是形容词，其副词形式是probably。故probable改为probably。
（3）考查不定冠词。句意：如果你进行一个小时的自行车旅行，你可能会燃烧很多卡路里。one﹣hour"一个小时的"在此修饰名词trip，前面需要一个不定冠词来进行限定，one是元音音素开头的单词，其前要用不定冠词an。故one﹣hour前加an。
（4）考查名词。句意：如果你的目标是减肥，一周一磅是有益的。objection是名词，但意思是"反对"，根据句意可知，此处意思是"目标"，要用名词object。故objection改为object。
（5）考查谓语动词时态。句意：快速减肥的人很可能在一年内体重反弹。该句中who引导的是定语从句，根据主句意思可知，表达的是一个客观现象，所以从句谓语动词的时态也是一般现在时，lost是过去式，主语是who，指代先行词people，所以要变回动词原形lose。故lost改为lose。
（6）考查动词不定式。句意：快速减肥的人很可能在一年内体重反弹。定语从句中使用了短语be likely to do sth.意思是"很可能做某事"，所以动词regain前要加to来完善动词不定式的形式。故regain前加to。
（7）考查肯定句。句意：如果骑自行车是我们生活的一部分，有必要同时戒掉糖和咖啡。根据句意可知，主句部分的意思是肯定的，所以否定词not多余。故删去not。
（8）考查定冠词。句意：如果骑自行车是我们生活的一部分，有必要同时戒掉糖和咖啡。表示"同时"要用固定搭配at the same time，所以不定冠词a要改为定冠词the。故a改为the。
（9）考查名词。句意：此外，健康的饮食也很重要。表达"很重要"，可以用系表结构的be greatly important或者be of great importance，此处是介词短语作表语。故important改为importance。
（10）考查形容词比较级。句意：如果你每天骑车并且健康饮食，你会感觉更健康。feel much more healthier是系表结构，但比较级重复使用了，所以去掉more。故删去more。

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