假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201793. （2024•西安中学•五模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Success rarely happen overnight.It is perseverance that makes failure the mother of success.I used to struggle with my math.However hard I tried，little progresses was made.I was about to give up while my math teacher came to my assistance.She told me the value of perseverance and encouraged me keep going.I took her advice and changed her strategy.At the same time，when I had difficulty solved problems，I would ask my teacher for help.It worked at the last and my grades gradual improved.This experience tells me that life is a journey what requires continuous efforts.Only by constant efforts could we eventually obtain success.

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品行与态度，说明文，

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1.happen

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happens2.progresses

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progress 3.while

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when4.keep

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to5.her

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my6.solved

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solving7.

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the 8.gradual

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gradually9.what

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which/that10.could

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can

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Success rarely happen overnight.It is perseverance that makes failure the mother of success.I used to struggle with my math.However hard I tried，little progresses was made.I was about to give up while my math teacher came to my assistance.She told me the value of perseverance and encouraged me ∧keep going.I took her advice and changed her strategy.At the same time，when I had difficulty solved problems，I would ask my teacher for help.It worked at ~~the~~ last and my grades gradual improved.This experience tells me that life is a journey what requires continuous efforts.Only by constant efforts could we eventually obtain success.
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1.考查动词时态和主谓一致。句意：成功很少在一夜之间发生。分析句子可知，本句是一般现在时态，主语是success，不可数名词，故谓语动词应用happen的第三人称单数形式。故将happen改为happens。
2.考查不可数名词。句意：无论我多么努力，都没有取得什么进展。progress是不可数名词，无复数。故将progresses改为progress。
3.考查连词。句意：我正要放弃时，我的数学老师来帮助我。be about to do...when...是固定句型，意为"正要做……突然……"。故将while改为when。
4.考查动词不定式。句意：她告诉我毅力的价值，并鼓励我继续前进。encourage sb.to do sth.意为"鼓励某人做某事"。故在keep前加to。
5.考查形容词性物主代词。句意：我采纳了她的建议，改变了我的策略。主语是第一人称I，此处指"我的策略"，用形容词性物主代词my。故将her改为my。
6.考查动名词。句意：同时，当我在解决问题时遇到困难时，我会向老师寻求帮助。have difficulty （in） doing sth.意为"做某事有困难"，solve用动名词形式。故将solved改为solving。
7.考查固定短语。句意：最后它奏效了，我的成绩也逐渐提高了。at last是固定短语，意为"最后"。故去掉the。
8.考查副词。句意：最后它奏效了，我的成绩也逐渐提高了。此处用副词gradually作状语修饰动词improved。故将gradual改为gradually。
9.考查定语从句。句意：这段经历告诉我，人生是一段需要不断努力的旅程。先行词是a journey，指物，关系词在从句中作主语，故用关系词which/that。故将what改为which/that。
10.考查情态动词。句意：只有不断努力，我们才能最终取得成功。根据上文可知，表现在的能力用情态动词can。故将could改为can。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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