假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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219804. （2020•高新一中•高一上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）.并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉，
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词，
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I've had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple，it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my café have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty".In the cafe，customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one，I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.

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日常生活，说明文，

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（1）opens改为open（2）required改为requires（3）ordinarily改为ordinary（4）café和have之间加to（5）去掉like（6）yourselves改为themselves（7）what改为that/which（8）manage改为managing（9）city改为cities（10）an改为a

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I've had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple，it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my café ∧have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty".In the cafe，customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one，I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
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（1）考查动词不定式。句意：现在我的梦想是开一家咖啡馆。这里是动词不定式to do作表语，故：opens改为open。
（2）考查时态。句意：虽然它可能很简单，但需要很多想法和努力。前后时态一致，可知这里用一般现在时，和主语it一致，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故：required改为requires。
（3）考查形容词。句意：我想要的不仅仅是一家普通的咖啡馆，而是一家非常特别的咖啡馆。修饰名词cafe，用形容词，故：ordinarily改为ordinary。
（4）考查动词不定式。句意：我希望我的咖啡馆有一个特别的主题，比如"唐朝"。作want my café的补语，用动词不定式，故：café和have之间加to。
（5）考查介词。句意：我希望我的咖啡馆有一个特别的主题，比如"唐朝"。such as表示"例如"，所以和like重复，故：去掉like。
（6）考查代词。句意：在咖啡馆里，顾客可以在为他们创造的历史环境中尽情享受。和customers一致，用themselves，故：yourselves改为themselves。
（7）考查定语从句。句意：在咖啡馆里，顾客可以在为他们创造的历史环境中尽情享受。代指先行词 the historical environment，作定语从句is created for them的主语，关系词用that/which，故：what改为that/which。
（8）考查动名词。句意：如果我成功地管理了一个，我会开更多家。介词in后用动名词作宾语，故：manage改为managing。
（9）考查可数名词复数。句意：我希望在许多不同的城市都有连锁咖啡馆。根据修饰词many different，可知用可数名词city的复数形式，故：city改为cities。
（10）考查冠词。句意：我的每个咖啡馆都有不同的主题和独特的风格。。unique style以辅音音素开头，所以冠词用a，故：an改为a。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Life without a hobby is like food without salt.I have various hobby like drawing，gardening，photography and reading，among that my favorite hobby is reading.It is no doubt that reading is of much benefit to me in many ways.First of all，reading makes me feeling happy and relaxed，especial when I'm tired from my schoolwork.Therefore，reading was a perfect way to spend my spare time.What's the more，reading broadens my horizons but enriches my life as well.Apart from these，it is reading that allows me obtain courage，kindness and confidence，making me a better person.Let's form the habit of reading and benefit from them.

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201992. （2023•新城区•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Recently，our school held an event naming"Traditional Chinese Culture into the Campus".Various activity were organized in this event，such as learning operas，paper cutting and Chinese calligraphy.The teachers and.the students，who were all very exciting and full of curiosity，participated in the event active.After the event，they have a discussion and shared with their own ideas about the traditional culture.The event turned out to be great success，from that all the students benefited a lot.Not only did they improve their awareness of the traditional Chinese culture，and they also realized it was their responsibility to preserve the traditional Chinese culture and spread them all over the world.

共享时间:2023-03-15 难度:2 相似度:2

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205966. （2016•西安一中•高一下期末） Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant．
As a single mother of two young girls，my life is stressful sometimes．I love my girl，and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands of a child and a full-time student．Although telling a couple of jokes can't make them to disappear，turning chores into games certainly helped．Getting up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when there is hearty laughter．
Laughter is the best medicine．Last summer the close family member was diagnosed with cancer．The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months to live．But he lived every day to the fullest，laughed and having fun．The doctor said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long．Because of that he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold．
That Robert Frost said，"If we couldn't laugh，we would all go stupid．Laughter may not make all the problems disappear，but laughter softens the blows that could easy bring us down．"

共享时间:2016-07-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202620. （2020•西安中学•一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life． I can't agree complete． Last Friday， I woke up very early and decide to take a walk． In the square there many senior citizens were dancing， I found several elders bury in feeding birds． Without many cars， I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful． Some coffee shops were decorated pretty well， which attracted our eyes． The whole city was covered with green tree， making it green city． At this moment， I found the city was so interesting． How I regret ignore its beauty before!

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214686. （2017•西安中学•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
第一节短文改错
Dear Brad，
I'm very glad to hear from you．In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China．Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group．Comparing with our parents，life for us is getting much hard．The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford．Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car．Therefore，I don't think love built on house and cars is true love，and I doubt how long it will last．
As a matter of fact，though situations are tough today，a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life．I believe we will have a nice future．
Li Hua．

共享时间:2017-11-13 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203193. （2016•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Music and songs play a important part in our daily life．For example，it can bring us pleasure and make us happy．However，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency．I was fond of listening to songs and music very much，but my favorite song is Country Road．The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved to Grandma．What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow．In a word，once enjoying，the song will never be forgotten．

共享时间:2016-04-04 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203174. （2016•西安中学•四模）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从11 处起）不计分．
Patience is great importance in our daily life．Once I waited for a bus to come at a stop．30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decide to walk on foot．But no sooner had I left when a bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minutes，I would have caught it．If I chose to take the next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

共享时间:2016-04-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205828. （2017•西安中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
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My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when wevisitBeijing last month．It is in the downtown area，butit is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in acomfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked bestwerethe free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also sharedformy friends many photostakingin Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several localdish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend ofmewho is going to Beijing．

共享时间:2017-07-11 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202981. （2017•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分．
A young man calling Brother Low-Carbon became a hit on the Internet in 2012．He suggests we should live a low carbon life，which means using more energy in his daily life，thus reducing carbon dioxide in the air．For example，he always collects some waste paper or uses the blank sides to write something on．While watching TV，he always turned down the lamp to the minimum and turns off the light．Besides，he goes to work by bike instead driving．Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can live such a simple life with so many modern invention around us．Personally，I strong support his idea and his behavior．Although what he is doing have no huge effect on global warming，he can enjoy healthy life at least．

共享时间:2017-04-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202287. （2022•西工大附中•七模） No body language can be more attractive/fascinating than smiling．Not only can a beautiful smile make （1）       （us） happy，but also it enables others to feel （2）       （delight）．（3）       a smile is so powerful that it gives people （4）       （suffer） from disasters great courage．
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共享时间:2022-06-09 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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219389. （2021•鄠邑二中•高三上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
According to scientific researches，complaining every day was bad for you.It actual hurts your brain.It causes damage to the areas for learning，make new memories，and solving problems.Complaining is bad for the people around you as well，that is just like secondhand smoke.The negative comments and energy also affects them and get to them.So，turn the negative thought into positive ones.Also，be sure to calm you so you can see real problem and fix it.Finally，appreciate the good or forget the bad.Your brain will thank you for not to complaining.

共享时间:2021-12-30 难度:2 相似度:1

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213016. （2023•长安区一中•高三上期中）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually，only find there was nobody in the classroom because it was Sunday. "How a bad memory I have!" I couldn't help laughing.Stand in front of the school gate，I began to wonder what to do next.Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. "Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather？" I immediately telephoned some of my best friends，but they all agreed to come to join me.About two hours late，we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there.We really enjoyed us hugely.

共享时间:2023-11-10 难度:2 相似度:1

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213701. （2023•高新一中•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）：划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，（从第11处起）不计分。
    More and more people attach great importance relationships in career success.Being polite is the first but most important step to develop good relationships among friends.Polite word can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.
    Always saying "please"and"thank you"will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary.We all know that one man's success is based on what he deals with people.Always being grateful to others people's kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say.The more support you win from other people，the more faster you will move towards your goal.
    Remember，being polite cost nothing but it's worth a million dollars.

共享时间:2023-05-30 难度:2 相似度:1

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219651. （2020•长安区一中•高一上二月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
My village lie in the mountains in southwest China．Although the climate and landscape are pleased，people lead a tough life there．At the beginning of the 21^st century，the government began to attach great importance to its development，under the influence of that，people's living condition began to improve．A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found，which made them convenient to develop economy．What's more，many student was admitted into famous universities．In a word，thank to the government's support，great changes have been taken place in the past few years．My village takes up a new look now．

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215043. （2017•长安区一中•高二下期中）文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
Dear Peter，
I'd like to ask you to write a article for our school's English newspaper．
The"Foreign Cultures"section in our newspaper is very popular with us student．It carries articles writing by foreign friends about the cultures of his home countries．Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States？But we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spent their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students．You can write anything is relevant so long as it's interested and informative.400 words would be fine．By the way，I wonder if we can have your article before June 28 or not．
I'm looking forward to hearing of you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

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