假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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201869. （2024•西安一中•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He was realized that it is the attitude of Ubuntu which helps bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.

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[答案]

在

game

前加

；

2.meter

改为

meters

；

3.raced

改为

racing

；

4.on

改为

；

5.equal

改为

equally

；

6.says

改为

said

；

7.nobody

改为

everybody/everyone

；

删掉

was

；

9.which

改为

that

；

10.we

改为

。

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When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested ∧ game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He ~~was~~ realized that it is the attitude of Ubuntu which helps bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.
1.考查冠词。句意：在访问非洲的一个村庄时，一位科学家建议当地的孩子玩一个游戏。game"游戏"为可数名词，此处意为"一个游戏"，泛指，game为辅音音素开头，应用不定冠词a。故在game前加a。
2.考查名词复数。句意：他把一篮子糖果放在100米外的一棵树下。meter"米"前面有数词100，应用复数形式meters。故meter改为meters。
3.考查动名词。句意：但是当他说"开始"的时候，孩子们没有争抢，而是手拉手地跑向篮子。instead of为介词短语，应跟动词race的动名词形式racing作宾语。故raced改为racing。
4.考查固定短语。句意：但是当他说"开始"的时候，孩子们没有争抢，而是手拉手地跑向篮子。hand in hand"手拉手"为固定短语。故on改为in。
5.考查副词。句意：最后，他们把糖果平均分了。修饰动词divided应用副词equally作状语。故equal改为equally。
6.考查时态。句意：当被问及为什么这样做时，他们说"Ubuntu"。此句陈述过去的事情，应用一般过去时态。故says改为said。
7.考查代词。句意：它意思是每个人都应该与他人分享幸福。根据句意和句子结构，"每个人"用代词everybody或everyone。故nobody改为everybody/everyone。
8.考查语态。句意：他意识到，正是Ubuntu的态度帮助人们团结在一起。分析句子可知，主语He与动词realize之间为主动关系，应用主动语态，谓语动词为realized。故删掉was。
9.考查强调句型。句意：他意识到，正是Ubuntu的态度帮助人们团结在一起。此句为主从复合句，宾语从句为强调句型"it is+被强调部分+that…"。故which改为that。
10.考查代词宾格。句意：总的来说，这个词提醒我们社区和相互关心的重要性。remind sb of sth"提醒某人某事"中sb作动词remind的宾语，应用人称代词we的宾格形式us。故we改为us。

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219483. （2021•铁一中学•高一上二月） One day，I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ，people were chatting with English.I try to chat with some of them.To my surprised，I found the oral English of some junior students were better than mine.I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ.But every day after that，I would spend one hour practise my oral English：on-QQ.Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions.With time went by，I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

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