假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌的作文文中共有处错误每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下面划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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219593. （2020•西安一中•高二上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate， with that I fell in love at first sight. She was warm-hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face. I was homesick in the first few days， unable to adjust to the new school. It was with her help which I got familiar the school. However， what impressed me most was her diligence and determine. When faced with a challenge in study， she would try out her best to solve it. Whenever I was in trouble， she would encourage myself and help me out. But for her encouragement， I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady.
Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me. May our friendship lasts forever.

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日常生活，学习，

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1.that改为whom2.a改为an 3.which改为that 4.familiar后加with5.determine改为determination 6.去掉try后的out 7.myself改为me 8.steady改为steadily 9.Have改为Having 10.lasts改为last

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The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate， with that I fell in love at first sight. She was warm﹣hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face. I was homesick in the first few days， unable to adjust to the new school. It was with her help which I got familiar∧ the school. However， what impressed me most was her diligence and determine. When faced with a challenge in study， she would try out her best to solve it. Whenever I was in trouble， she would encourage myself and help me out. But for her encouragement， I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady.
Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me. May our friendship lasts forever

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1. that 改为whom。考查定语从句。句意：我在高中遇到的第一个人是我的同桌，我和她一见钟情。本句为"介词+关系代词"结构的定语从句，修饰先行词my deskmate，且先行词做介词with的宾语，指人可用关系代词whom和that。因为当介词前移的时候，不可以用that代替。故that改为whom。
2. a 改为an。考查冠词。句意：她很热心，脸上总是带着真诚的微笑。smile为可数名词前面需要用冠词修饰。根据句意可知，此处表达"脸上带着真诚的微笑"是泛指概念，需要用不定冠词。honest为元音音素开头的单词，故应用不定冠词an。故a改为an。
3.which改为 that。考查强调句。句意：正是在她的帮助下，我才熟悉了这所学校。分析句子结构可知本句为强调句结构"it is （was）+被强调成分+that （who）+其他"，本句中强调的是with her help，故用that。故which改为that。
4. familiar后加with。考查介词。句意见上一题。固定搭配get familiar with sth.译为"对……熟悉"。故在familiar后加with。
5.determine 改为 determination。考查名词。句意：然而，给我印象最深的是她的勤奋和决心。根据上文her diligence and可知应用名词形式，表示"决心"。故determine改为determination。
6. 去掉try后的out。考查固定短语。句意：当面临学习上的挑战时，她会尽力解决它。固定搭配try one's best to do sth.译为"尽全力做某事"。故去掉try后面的out。
7. myself 改为me。考查代词。句意：每当我遇到困难时，她总是鼓励我，帮助我。根据下文"help me out"可知，此处用代词宾格做动词encourage的宾语，指"鼓励我"所以用宾格形式me。故myself改为me。
8. steady 改为 steadily。考查副词。句意：如果没有她的鼓励，我就不会进步这么快和稳定。根据句意可知，此处修饰动词progressed，应该是用副词形式。故将steady改为steadily。
9. Have 改为Having。考查动名词短语作主语。句意：有这么好的女孩做我的朋友对我来说是大好的运气。分析句子结构可知本句缺少主语，需用动名词短语做主语。故Have 改为Having。
10. lasts 改为last。考查时态语态。句意：愿我们的友谊天长地久。may在表示美好祝愿时可以置于句首，may为情态动词，后跟动词原形。主语our friendship与谓语last是主动关系。故lasts改为last。

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Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you don't have self-confidence．The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is ay as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies as well．Unless someone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily．

共享时间:2015-11-18 难度:2 相似度:2

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202696. （2020•西安中学•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
    She was warm-hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face．I was homesick in the first few days，unable to adjust the new school．It was with her help which I got familiar with the school．However，what impressed me most was her diligence and determine．When faced with a challenge in study，she would try out her best to solve it．Whenever I was in trouble，she would encourage myself and help me out．But for her encouragement，I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady．
    Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me．May our friendship lasts forever．

共享时间:2020-03-30 难度:2 相似度:2

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220537. （2015•七十中•高一上一月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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I have many friends really worth mentioned，but my best friend is Li Mei．We have much in common in much aspects，such as hobby and thoughts．I think this is the foundation of us friendship．If she is not tall，she is very pretty．She always wear a smile and gives us the impression that she is kind and easy-going．Actual she iy．Besides，she is very clever．She not only does well every subject but also takes part in many after-class activities．I really admire her．She is always willing to help me，that makes me to feel very grateful．I really value our friendship and I hope it will last forever．

共享时间:2015-10-21 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203174. （2016•西安中学•四模）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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Patience is great importance in our daily life．Once I waited for a bus to come at a stop．30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decide to walk on foot．But no sooner had I left when a bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minutes，I would have caught it．If I chose to take the next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

共享时间:2016-04-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205828. （2017•西安中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when wevisitBeijing last month．It is in the downtown area，butit is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in acomfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked bestwerethe free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also sharedformy friends many photostakingin Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several localdish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend ofmewho is going to Beijing．

共享时间:2017-07-11 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205758. （2018•西安一中•高一上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you've been ill for days．How are you feeling now？
I know that you are devoting all your energy from study．But I just want to say exercises is as important as study．Do exercise will not waste your time．Instead，it can refresh your mind．After one and two hours' exercise，you can study more effective．Only when you have the strong body can we keep on studying without feeling uncomfortable．However your study will be affected by your health．
I hope you can take at least one hour's exercise each day before you recover from your illness．I wish you will be well soon．
Yours sincerely，
John

共享时间:2018-02-23 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205475. （2020•未央区•高一上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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Dear David，
How time flies!It's been an entirely week since you left our school.You can't imagine what I miss the time we spent together.I am very happy to be your friends and grateful to your help with my English.I really got pleasure from speak English with you and it was the first time that I found it not difficult to learn English.Because of I have learned a lot from you，I am more confident of your future study.
Although we are not in a same country now，our friendship will last forever.And I hope it will not be long before we met again.
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共享时间:2020-02-14 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205430. （2020•西安中学•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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Dear Bill，
How time flies!I went back to school and begin my lesson last month．It will be ten months before I attend the College Entrance Examination，that makes me worried．I failed pass the English test last term because of I had difficulty with it．I will never give up and determine to give myself the second chance to pass them．I will ask my teachers and friends for advices on how to improve it and work out a detailed plan．Besides，I'll make fully use of time．Do you have any good ideas？Tell me or I will be grateful to you．
I'm looking forward to hear from you．
Yours，
Li Hua

共享时间:2020-07-19 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205103. （2022•蓝田县•高二下期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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   Online learning has become an important way to learn recently.However，online learning have both advantages and disadvantages.
   Its advantages are obviously.It allows us learn at any time wherever we are.Besides，it is much more easier for us to absorb resources who are available online.However，its disadvantages cannot be ignoring.Staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to us eyes.Worse still，we don't have many opportunity to interact with teachers and classmates.
   Then how to be smart online learners？First，we should discuss problems with others courageously.Second，it is wise to take the short break after learning for half an hour.
   On conclusion，only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.

共享时间:2022-07-22 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214686. （2017•西安中学•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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第一节短文改错
Dear Brad，
I'm very glad to hear from you．In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China．Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group．Comparing with our parents，life for us is getting much hard．The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford．Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car．Therefore，I don't think love built on house and cars is true love，and I doubt how long it will last．
As a matter of fact，though situations are tough today，a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life．I believe we will have a nice future．
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共享时间:2017-11-13 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203490. （2015•师大附中•四模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或者修改．（从第11处开始不计分）（满分15分）
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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I'm a senior 3 student． The college entrance exam is on the way but everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different way． At school， all the teachers work very hard， encourage us to build up our confidence and inspiring us improve our study． Whenever we meet with difficulties， they are ready to come to our help． Meanwhile， our school also provides good facilities to us students， for an example the library stay open in the evenings and even on the weekends． At home， our parents take good care of us and make sure we are good fed so that we can always be full of energy．
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers． I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam． I am sure that with our encouragement and timely help I would be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．

共享时间:2015-04-28 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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205966. （2016•西安一中•高一下期末） Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant．
As a single mother of two young girls，my life is stressful sometimes．I love my girl，and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands of a child and a full-time student．Although telling a couple of jokes can't make them to disappear，turning chores into games certainly helped．Getting up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when there is hearty laughter．
Laughter is the best medicine．Last summer the close family member was diagnosed with cancer．The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months to live．But he lived every day to the fullest，laughed and having fun．The doctor said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long．Because of that he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold．
That Robert Frost said，"If we couldn't laugh，we would all go stupid．Laughter may not make all the problems disappear，but laughter softens the blows that could easy bring us down．"

共享时间:2016-07-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203193. （2016•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Music and songs play a important part in our daily life．For example，it can bring us pleasure and make us happy．However，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency．I was fond of listening to songs and music very much，but my favorite song is Country Road．The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved to Grandma．What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow．In a word，once enjoying，the song will never be forgotten．

共享时间:2016-04-04 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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203289. （2016•华清中学•二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are advantage for students to work while studying at school．One of them was that them can earn money．For the most part，students working to earn money for their own use．Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please．They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money．Some students may also to save up for our college or future use．

共享时间:2016-03-20 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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202981. （2017•西安中学•三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分．
A young man calling Brother Low-Carbon became a hit on the Internet in 2012．He suggests we should live a low carbon life，which means using more energy in his daily life，thus reducing carbon dioxide in the air．For example，he always collects some waste paper or uses the blank sides to write something on．While watching TV，he always turned down the lamp to the minimum and turns off the light．Besides，he goes to work by bike instead driving．Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can live such a simple life with so many modern invention around us．Personally，I strong support his idea and his behavior．Although what he is doing have no huge effect on global warming，he can enjoy healthy life at least．

共享时间:2017-04-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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