[解析]
Patience is ∧ great importance in our daily life.Once I waited for a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past,but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed,I decide to walk on foot.But no sooner had I left when a bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minutes,I would have caught it.If I chose to take the next bus,I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience,I'll think of this experience.
详解:
1.is后加of.考查固定句型.be+of+抽象名词,相当于be+该抽象名词的形容词形成,主要用来表示主语的性质.这一结构中的抽象名词前可用great,little,no,some,any,not much等修饰,以表示不同的程度,抽象名词常用importance,value,use等.
2.past改成passed.考查动词.30 minutes past,but no bus came.But连接两个并列句,所以30 minutes后是谓语动词,而past是介词,pass是动词.
3.decide改成decided.考查动词时态.此处讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
4.when 改成than.考查固定句型.no sooner …than …意为"一…就…",是固定用法.
5.minutes改成minute.考查名词.minute是可数名词,根据语境要用单数形式.
6.other改成another.another +数字+复数名词,意思是"又几个,再几个",而用other则顺序为:数字+other +名词.
7.do 改成did.考查动词时态.本文描述的是过去的一次经历,应用一般过去时态.
8.possible 改成possibly.考查副词.waste是动词,要用副词修饰.
9.去掉it.考查定语从句.That引导定语从句,其先行词是effort,在从句中做put的宾语,而it在句中也做put的宾语,成分重复,把it去掉.
10.lose改成losing.考查动名词.be close to 意为"差一点,几乎",短语中介词to是介词,后面用名词或动名词.