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Afterschool,Itoldmymommyplan."Tonight,we'regoingtocreateanewrecipetogether,"Isaid,myvoicefilledwithdetermination.Hereyeswidenedinsurprise,butshequicklynodded,asparkofinterestignitinginhergaze."Alright,let'sdoit.I'vealwayswantedtotrysomethingnew,butneverhadthetime,"sheadmitted.Wescouredthekitchen,pullingoutingredientsthatwehadnevercombinedbefore.Aswechopped,mixed,andfried,welaughedandsharedstories,creatingabondoveroursharedendeavor.Despitetheoccasionalmishap,likeabittoomuchgarlicoraslightlyburntcrumbtopping,wewerehavingfun.Thiswasmorethanjustcooking;itwasaculinaryadventurethatbroughtusclosertogether.
Thedayofthecompetitionarrived,andthekitchenclassroomwasfilledwithactivity.Studentswerebustlingaround,theirfacesamixofconcentrationandnervousenergy.Theairwasthickwiththescentsofvariousdishesbeingprepared.Whenthejudgesannouncedtheingredientsforourdishes,myheartraced.Ihadpracticed,butthiswastherealtest.Icombinedtheingredientswithcreativity,turningthemintoadishthatrepresentedmygrowthasacook.Asthecompetitionendedandtheresultswereannounced,Ididn'twinfirstplace,butIdidn'tfeeldisappointed.Ihadlearnedsomethingfarmorevaluable—howtocreate,adapt,andenjoytheprocessofcookingwithsomeoneIlove.MymomandIexchangedaproudsmile;wehadwonanewrecipeandtheconfidencetokeepexploringtheworldofflavors.
[解析]
After school,I told my mom my plan. "Tonight,we're going to create a new recipe together," I said,my voice filled with determination.Her eyes widened in surprise,but she quickly nodded,a spark of interest igniting in her gaze. "Alright,let's do it.I've always wanted to try something new,but never had the time," she admitted.We scoured the kitchen,pulling out ingredients that we had never combined before.【高分句型一】As we chopped,mixed,and fried,we laughed and shared stories,creating a bond over our shared endeavor.【高分句型二】Despite the occasional mishap,like a bit too much garlic or a slightly burnt crumb topping,we were having fun.This was more than just cooking;it was a culinary adventure that brought us closer together.(描写了作者和妈妈在放学后一起尝试创作新食谱的愉快经历)
The day of the competition arrived,and the kitchen classroom was filled with activity.Students were bustling around,their faces a mix of concentration and nervous energy.The air was thick with the scents of various dishes being prepared.When the judges announced the ingredients for our dishes,my heart raced.I had practiced,but this was the real test.I combined the ingredients with creativity,turning them into a dish that represented my growth as a cook.As the competition ended and the results were announced,I didn't win first place,but I didn't feel disappointed.I had learned something far more valuable— how to create,adapt,and enjoy the process of cooking with someone I love.My mom and I exchanged a proud smile;we had won a new recipe and the confidence to keep exploring the world of flavors.(描写了作者在烹饪比赛中的经历以及通过比赛所获得的深刻感悟和收获)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。