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Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse"Wheremightmymotherbe?shewondered."Isshereallysoangrywithmethatshedoesn'twanttoshowmeanycare?Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother,andshejustrealizedthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther.Tearsrolleddownhercheeks.
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Agentletouchonherhaircallhermindback.Sheraisedherbeadtoseethefamiliarfaceandtheworriedeyes.HereyoucomeI'vebeenlookingforyou,camethetiredvoice.Jennycouldn'thelpbutthrowherselfintohermother'sarms."sorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme.Sheexpressedthesincereapologyandthegreatgratitude.Thenshefeltthehugtightened.
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Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house " Where might my mother be?she wondered. "Is she really so angry with me that she doesn't want to show me any care?Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother,and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her.【高分句型一】Tears rolled down her cheeks.(描述珍妮意识到,母亲的责骂都是因为母亲真的很关心她。)
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A gentle touch on her hair call her mind back.She raised her bead to see the familiar face and the worried eyes.Here you come I've been looking for you,came the tired voice.Jenny couldn't help but throw herself into her mother's arms.【高分句型二】" sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude.Then she felt the hug tightened. (描述母女相见,珍妮向母亲表达了诚挚的歉意和巨大的感激之情。)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。