[答案]
Then,Mr.SmithbegantotellBillyhisstory. "Atthattime,IusuallyskippedclassesandeveryteacherwasseeminglyusedtothatexceptMrHoward.Hearrestedmeagainandagain,sofinallyIyieldedincaseofmeetinghisdisappointedeyes.Andhenoticedmychangeandtalkedwithmeaboutfuturepatiently.ItwasthefirsttimeIhadheardsomebodywhoadvisedmetofurthermyeducationandIbegantostudyhardtobeadmittedintoacollegewiththehelpofscholarship.AndfinallyImadeit."
BillywasgreatlytouchedbyMr.Smith'sstory.Sohebegantolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishhishomeworkbyhimself.Fortunately,Mr.Smithwaswillingtohelphimmakeupwhathemissedbeforeandotherteacherswereallgladtoseehischangeandanswerhisquestionwithpatience.Eventually,withBilly'seffortandhisteachers'support,hewasadmittedintoafamouscollegeandbecameadoctor.
[解析]
Then,Mr.Smith began to tell Billy his story. "At that time,I usually skipped classes and every teacher was seemingly used to that except Mr Howard.He arrested me again and again,so finally I yielded in case of meeting his disappointed eyes.And he noticed my change and talked with me about future patiently.It was the first time I had heard somebody who advised me to further my education and I began to study hard to be admitted into a college with the help of scholarship.【高分句型一】And finally I made it."(Smith先生上学时一开始不认真,但是受到Howard先生的支持和鼓励后,努力学习取得成功)
Billy was greatly touched by Mr.Smith's story.So he began to listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish his homework by himself.Fortunately,Mr.Smith was willing to help him make up what he missed before and other teachers were all glad to see his change and answer his question with patience.【高分句型二】Eventually,with Billy's effort and his teachers' support,he was admitted into a famous college and became a doctor. (Billy发生转变,努力学习,最后也成功了)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。