[答案]
HearingMum'swords,Istaredatthevaluableblueribbon,lostinthought.Whatwasitthatmademesoafraid?Butstillnoanswercameout.Soonthecakewasfinished.Wewentbacktothekitchenforthebakedcake.Mumcutasliceforthesweetcakeandhandedittome,saying,"Youcanmakeit."Iraisedthewarmcaketomymouth.Itwassodeliciousandfragrant.SuddenlyIknewwhereIcouldfindmycourage.Itwasfrommymum'slove.
ThenextdayIwalkedtothefrontoftheclassroomtogivemyspeech.Seeingthequietclassroom,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelnervousagain,mymindgoingblindandmyvoicetrembling.ThenIsawtheblueribbonwhichmymumtiedtomywrist.IthoughtofMum'swarmcake,herloveandherinspiringexperience.ThenItookadeepbreathandgavemyspeechwithconfidence.Thistimetherewasnofearanymorebutabigsuccessandaroundofapplause.
[解析]
Hearing Mum's words,I stared at the valuable blue ribbon,lost in thought.What was it that made me so afraid?But still no answer came out.Soon the cake was finished.We went back to the kitchen for the baked cake.Mum cut a slice for the sweet cake and handed it to me,saying, "You can make it." I raised the warm cake to my mouth.It was so delicious and fragrant.Suddenly I knew where I could find my courage.【高分句型一】It was from my mum's love.(作者对自己的思考,妈妈用蛋糕鼓励作者,而妈妈的蛋糕让作者豁然开朗,作者发现自己的勇气源自妈妈的爱)
The next day I walked to the front of the classroom to give my speech.Seeing the quiet classroom,I couldn't help but feel nervous again,my mind going blind and my voice trembling.【高分句型二】Then I saw the blue ribbon which my mum tied to my wrist.I thought of Mum's warm cake,her love and her inspiring experience.Then I took a deep breath and gave my speech with confidence.This time there was no fear any more but a big success and a round of applause.(作者进行演讲的过程,一开始作者紧张的毛病又犯了,但是想到了妈妈的爱和鼓励以及妈妈的励志经历,作者平静了下来,成功完成演讲)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"基础题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。