[答案]
Aswewaitedforrescue,whattheelderlywomandidtouchedmealot.Despiteherownseriouscondition,shekepttryingtocomfortme.Shetoldmenottobeafraidandthathelpwouldcomesoon.Sheeventriedtoreachoutherhandtopatmegently,thoughshewasweak.Herwordswerelikeawarmrayofsunshineinthatdarkandscarymoment.Shesaidshebelievedinmyprofessionalismandthatwewouldbothbeoutofdanger.Hercalmnessandkindnessmademeregainmycomposure,andIheldherhandtightly,thankingherinmyheart.
Soon,otherambulancesandemergencypersonnelarrived.Theyquicklyassessedthesituationandstartedtherescuework.Withtheirprofessionalskills,theymanagedtofreemefromthetrappedspaceandcarefullycarriedtheelderlyladyout.Wewerebothsenttothenearesthospitalimmediately.Afterreceivingtreatment,Iwenttovisittheoldlady.Iexpressedmysinceregratitudetoherforhercomfortduringthedifficulttime.Hersimpleactofkindnessinthefaceofdangerleftadeep﹣markonme,andIrealizedthatintimesofcrisis,thepowerofhumankindnesscanbringhopeandstrength.
[解析]
As we waited for rescue,what the elderly woman did touched me a lot.Despite her own serious condition,she kept trying to comfort me.She told me not to be afraid and that help would come soon.She even tried to reach out her hand to pat me gently,though she was weak.【高分句型一】Her words were like a warm ray of sunshine in that dark and scary moment.She said she believed in my professionalism and that we would both be out of danger.Her calmness and kindness made me regain my composure,and I held her hand tightly,thanking her in my heart.(老人对自己关心和鼓励,体现老人善良和坚强的品质)
Soon,other ambulances and emergency personnel arrived.They quickly assessed the situation and started the rescue work.With their professional skills,they managed to free me from the trapped space and carefully carried the elderly lady out.We were both sent to the nearest hospital immediately.After receiving treatment,I went to visit the old lady.I expressed my sincere gratitude to her for her comfort during the difficult time.Her simple act of kindness in the face of danger left a deep﹣mark on me,and I realized that in times of crisis,the power of human kindness can bring hope and strength.【高分句型二】(救援人员到达后的行动和自己对老人的感激之情)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。