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Emilylistenedtohermothercarefullyandfollowedhermom'ssuggestion.Thenextday,shebegantopracticesingingoutside.Gradually,hercouragebecamegreaterandgreater,andthesoundofhersingingwasalsolouderandlouder.Monthslater,Shecouldsingasshewaswalking.Anaughtyboywhohadlaughedatherbeforecriedtoher,"Emily,coward!Emily,coward!"However,shechosetoignorehisbehavior.
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Goingonsinging,shewalkedintothepark,wheremanypeopleweresinginganddancing.Hearingherbeautifulvoice,somestoppedtolistentohersingingandclappedforher.Emilyfeltpleasedthatshecouldsingconfidentlyinfrontofstrangers.Thesecondyear,theneighborhoodheldthesingingcompetitionagain.Thistime,Emilywalkedontothestagebravely,andherloudandbeautifulvoiceofsingingmovedallthepeople.Theyallcheeredforher,includingthosewhohadlaughedather.Hermotherwasdelightedtoseethetimidgirlhadbeenabraveone.
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Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom's suggestion.The next day,she began to practice singing outside.Gradually,her courage became greater and greater,and the sound of her singing was also louder and louder.Months later,She could sing as she was walking.A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, "Emily,coward!Emily,coward!"【高分句型一】However,she chose to ignore his behavior.(Emily听从妈妈的建议,每天练习唱歌)
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Going on singing,she walked into the park,where many people were singing and dancing.Hearing her beautiful voice,some stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her.【高分句型二】Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in front of strangers.The second year,the neighborhood held the singing competition again.This time,Emily walked onto the stage bravely,and her loud and beautiful voice of singing moved all the people.They all cheered for her,including those who had laughed at her.Her mother was delighted to see the timid girl had been a brave one.(第二年Emily参加歌唱比赛,声音感动了观众)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。