假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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214567. （2019•长安五中•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I will share one experience with you．With the College Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approach me and said， "In life we all have moment when we can't achieve what we want it．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire you．" Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained what I deserved．
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．

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I will share one experience with you．With the College Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approach me and said，"In life we all have moment when we can't achieve what we want it．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire you．" Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained what I deserved．So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．
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1．draw→drawing．考查非谓语动词．with的复合结构中，宾语the College Entrance Examination与动词draw之间为主谓关系，用现在分词．故将draw改为drawing．
2．However→Therefore．考查副词．"我心里充满了焦虑"，与"我不能专心学习"之间为因果关系而非转折关系，应用however．故将However改为Therefore．
3．from→in．考查介词．result from表示产生于…，由…引起．这里"我考试不及格"是前面"我不能专心学习"所产生的结果，应该用动词短语result in（引起，导致），故将from改为in．
4．discouraging→discouraged．考查形容词．discouraging（令人沮丧的），表达事物本身所具有的性质或特征，此句主语是I，表达人对事物的感受，应用形容词discouraged（泄气的、沮丧的）．故将discouraging改为discouraged．
5．approch→approached．考查动词的时态．这里讲述过去发生的事情，and连接并列的谓语动词，此处应与said一致用一般过去时．故将approch改为approached．
6．moment→moments．考查名词的数．moment（片刻、瞬间）是可数名词，应用复数形式．故将moment改为moments．
7．去掉it．考查代词．what引导宾语从句，且在从句中作动词want的宾语，it是多余的，故去掉it．
8．and→but．考查连词．根据句意：不要让那些时刻削弱你，把它们变成激励你的动力．前后句之间应为转折关系，用连词but．故将and改为but．
9．myself→me．考查代词．此处作动词provided的宾语，主语which指代名词reminder，宾语应为代词的宾格．故将myself改为me．
10．which→that．考查连接词．分析句子可知，本句为强调句，强调主语an optimistic attitude，根据强调句结构：it is/was+被强调部分+that+句子其他部分，可知，此处应该用that．that在强调句中只起了构成句式的作用，本身没有实际含义．故将which改为that．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
    Nowadays more and more students are beginning to realize the importance of learn English，but some find them difficult to get a chance to speak English in their daily life.In order improve the students' speaking ability，the students' union of our school has been decided to hold an oral English contest.
    It was to be held in the school meeting room from 2：00 p.m.to 5：00 p.m.in Oct.18.Three foreign teachers and seven English teachers will act as judge at the contest.The student whom wins the first prize will get a notebook computer.
    It is actual a good chance for every student in the school.Please take a active part in it.

共享时间:2022-05-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214640. （2018•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have many to share with my fellow students．
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those who stand by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends including．Without their help or advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood．I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made my mind to make every effort to study，for hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope that all the young fellow can make full use of time，because time and tide waiting for no man．

共享时间:2018-11-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214972. （2017•西安中学•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Nothing is impossible!If you have a dream，your dream will must come true as long as you always work hard．To tell truth，my dream is to be a doctor．There was a time that I was in hospital．I saw with my own eyes that a doctor fights all night to save a baby's life．I was touched by the kindly behavior of the doctor．I think doctors are the greatest．We can make patients recover from a disease．However，I am willing to give a hand to who suffers from illnesses．I hope that I'm able to help people keep healthy．At the same time，I will devote myself to treat patients．From now on，I will spare no effort to study every subjects so that I can go to a key university．

共享时间:2017-05-27 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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215301. （2016•长安区一中•高二下期中）短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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共享时间:2016-05-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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201678. （2024•师大附中•八模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When visiting a village in Africa，a scientist suggested game to the local children.He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away.Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets.But when he said "Go"，instead of raced for it，the children ran to the basket hand on hand.Finally，they divided the sweets out equal.When asked why they did so，they say "Ubuntu".It means nobody should share happiness with others.He was realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together.Generally，this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.

共享时间:2024-06-19 难度:2 相似度:1

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us study long hour.Our bodies need food for energy，and we usually reached for fats，oils，and sweets.Our brains create a specially feeling when we eat junk food.It makes us to feel good right away.The feeling doesn't last longer，though.It only lasts for short time.After that，we become tiring and uncomfortable.Most of them fix that by eating more junk food.After an hour，we start to get uncomfortable again.It's a circle what never ends.As time passes，these bad eating habits will lead into big problems.

共享时间:2023-11-20 难度:2 相似度:1

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213835. （2022•师大附中•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming increasing popular in senior high school.We also have many kind of after-class activities in our school，such as English Corner，Sunshine Radio Station，Happy Reading Club and so on.I'm most interested English corner，because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improving my spoken English.Beside，I'm a member of Sunshine Radio Station.On Monday mornings，every student are able to enjoy my sweet voice all over our school.Here I can have a unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of be a host may come true one day.These after-class activities make you become more confident and enrich my school life as well as.

共享时间:2022-05-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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213949. （2021•西安中学•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
    She was warm-hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face．I was homesick in the first few days，unable to adjust the new school．It was with her help which I got familiar with the school．However，what impressed me most was her diligence and determine．When faced with a challenge in study，she would try out her best to solve it．Whenever I was in trouble，she would encourage myself and help me out．But for her encouragement，I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady．
    Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me．May our friendship lasts forever．

共享时间:2021-11-14 难度:2 相似度:1

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214390. （2019•师大附中•高二上期中）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I firstly came to the U.K.，I found out the importances of knowing English.Wherever I took a bus to a bank，or went to the market to buy a food，I had to communicate in English.Otherwise things would not go smoothly.But there are two more important reasons for me to learning English.
One was to be able to go through the interview process to get a job but the other was to be able to read English and know what was going on the world.Luckily，I had learned English good enough.So，I nearly had no problem live in an English-speaking country any more.

共享时间:2019-11-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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