假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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213102. （2023•蓝田县•高一上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us study long hour.Our bodies need food for energy，and we usually reached for fats，oils，and sweets.Our brains create a specially feeling when we eat junk food.It makes us to feel good right away.The feeling doesn't last longer，though.It only lasts for short time.After that，we become tiring and uncomfortable.Most of them fix that by eating more junk food.After an hour，we start to get uncomfortable again.It's a circle what never ends.As time passes，these bad eating habits will lead into big problems.

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学习，环境保护，

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（1）hour改为hours（2）reached改为reach（3）specially改为special（4）去掉to（5）longer改为long（6）for后面加a（7）tiring改为tired（8）them改为us（9）what改为that/which（10）into改为to

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Most of us study long hour.Our bodies need food for energy，and we usually reached for fats，oils，and sweets.Our brains create a specially feeling when we eat junk food.It makes us to feel good right away.The feeling doesn't last longer，though.It only lasts for ∧short time.After that，we become tiring and uncomfortable.Most of them fix that by eating more junk food.After an hour，we start to get uncomfortable again.It's a circle what never ends.As time passes，these bad eating habits will lead into big problems.
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（1）hour改为hours.考查复数名词。句意：我们大多数人学习时间很长。hour为可数名词，所以用复数表示不止一个，故hour改为hours。
（2）reached改为reach.考查时态。句意：我们的身体需要食物来提供能量，我们通常会摄入脂肪、油和甜食。描述现状，所以用一般现在时态，主语为we，谓语用动词原形，故reached改为reach。
（3）specially改为special.考查形容词。句意：当我们吃垃圾食品时，我们的大脑会产生一种特殊的感觉。作定语修饰名词，所以用形容词，故specially改为special。
（4）去掉to.考查固定搭配。句意：它让我们立刻感觉良好。make sb.do sth.使某人做某事，故去掉to。
（5）longer改为long.考查形容词。句意：不过这种感觉不会持续太久。此处没有比较，所以用形容词原级作表语，故longer改为long。
（6）for后面加a.考查冠词。句意：它只持续很短的时间。表示一段时间，所以用不定冠词泛指，故for后面加a。
（7）tiring改为tired.考查形容词。句意：在那之后，我们变得疲惫和不舒服。此处表示人"疲惫的"，所以用tired，tiring指"令人疲惫的"，故tiring改为tired。
（8）them改为us.考查人称代词。句意：我们大多数人通过吃更多的垃圾食品来解决这个问题。指我们，所以用us作介词的宾语，故them改为us。
（9）what改为that/which.考查定语从句。句意：这是一个永远不会结束的循环。先行词为物，在定语从句中作主语，所以用which或that引导，what不引导定语从句，故what改为that/which。
（10）into改为to.考查介词。句意：随着时间的推移，这些不良的饮食习惯会导致大问题。lead to导致，为固定搭配，故into改为to。

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增加：在缺词处加一个符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
We senior school students do have some growing pains．Take some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams．These serious affect their physical and mental wellbeing．Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains．First，it is a good idea to having heart to heart talks with our parents，tell them we won't disappoint them．Meanwhile，it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic．As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance．

共享时间:2016-05-30 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214972. （2017•西安中学•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Nothing is impossible!If you have a dream，your dream will must come true as long as you always work hard．To tell truth，my dream is to be a doctor．There was a time that I was in hospital．I saw with my own eyes that a doctor fights all night to save a baby's life．I was touched by the kindly behavior of the doctor．I think doctors are the greatest．We can make patients recover from a disease．However，I am willing to give a hand to who suffers from illnesses．I hope that I'm able to help people keep healthy．At the same time，I will devote myself to treat patients．From now on，I will spare no effort to study every subjects so that I can go to a key university．

共享时间:2017-05-27 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214954. （2017•西安中学•高二下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I've been in Canada for two months．This is the first time that I have been away my family for such a long time．Fortunately，with the help of Katia，my new roommates，I've soon got used to live in the new environment．Katia is a nice and lively girl．We became friendortly after we meet each other．Although her English is a little hardly to understand，we enjoy chat and we usually talk a lot about our own families．He made me to know about the Russian culture．We were both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different．Now，we are planning a small party for this Sunday．Then，Katia will introduce me to some of her friends，one of who has been to China several times．I'm looking forward to the coming party．

共享时间:2017-05-29 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214640. （2018•西安中学•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have many to share with my fellow students．
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those who stand by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends including．Without their help or advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood．I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made my mind to make every effort to study，for hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope that all the young fellow can make full use of time，because time and tide waiting for no man．

共享时间:2018-11-18 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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214094. （2022•长安区一中•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
    Nowadays more and more students are beginning to realize the importance of learn English，but some find them difficult to get a chance to speak English in their daily life.In order improve the students' speaking ability，the students' union of our school has been decided to hold an oral English contest.
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    It is actual a good chance for every student in the school.Please take a active part in it.

共享时间:2022-05-15 难度:1 相似度:1.5

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213035. （2023•长安区一中•高二上期中）近年来，许多城市都流行兴建"口袋公园"，曾经的社区边角地摇身一变，成了家门口高颜值的小公园，给市民带来了惊喜。假定你是李华，你所在的城市也逐渐建了一些口袋公园，为此你校英文报社正在组织以"Pocket Parks in My Eyes"为主题的征文活动，请你撰写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）简要介绍"口袋公园"；
（2）阐述"口袋公园"的好处；
（3）号召绿色生活方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pocket Parks in My Eyes_____

共享时间:2023-11-29 难度:2 相似度:1

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213835. （2022•师大附中•高一下期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming increasing popular in senior high school.We also have many kind of after-class activities in our school，such as English Corner，Sunshine Radio Station，Happy Reading Club and so on.I'm most interested English corner，because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improving my spoken English.Beside，I'm a member of Sunshine Radio Station.On Monday mornings，every student are able to enjoy my sweet voice all over our school.Here I can have a unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of be a host may come true one day.These after-class activities make you become more confident and enrich my school life as well as.

共享时间:2022-05-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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213949. （2021•西安中学•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    The first person I met in my high school was my deskmate，with that I fell in love at first sight．
    She was warm-hearted and always wore a honest smile on her face．I was homesick in the first few days，unable to adjust the new school．It was with her help which I got familiar with the school．However，what impressed me most was her diligence and determine．When faced with a challenge in study，she would try out her best to solve it．Whenever I was in trouble，she would encourage myself and help me out．But for her encouragement，I wouldn't have progressed so fast and steady．
    Have so nice a girl as my friend is great luck for me．May our friendship lasts forever．

共享时间:2021-11-14 难度:2 相似度:1

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214390. （2019•师大附中•高二上期中）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I firstly came to the U.K.，I found out the importances of knowing English.Wherever I took a bus to a bank，or went to the market to buy a food，I had to communicate in English.Otherwise things would not go smoothly.But there are two more important reasons for me to learning English.
One was to be able to go through the interview process to get a job but the other was to be able to read English and know what was going on the world.Luckily，I had learned English good enough.So，I nearly had no problem live in an English-speaking country any more.

共享时间:2019-11-18 难度:2 相似度:1

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214446. （2019•西安中学•高一上期中）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
Last week I along with my classmates was asked to attend a lecture， the theme of whom was environmental protection． It was gave by a university professor． The professor first had us to come up with the problems the earth was facing with． Then he offered some suggestions on what we could do to save your planet in an effective way． Late after the lecture， I also searched the Internet about more information on this topic． Up to now， I learnt that the air pollution is universal and what we are likely to run out of some natural resources． To make things worst， climate change is becoming a great threat to human beings．

共享时间:2019-11-29 难度:2 相似度:1

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214567. （2019•长安五中•高三上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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I will share one experience with you．With the College Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approach me and said， "In life we all have moment when we can't achieve what we want it．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire you．" Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained what I deserved．
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．

共享时间:2019-11-13 难度:2 相似度:1

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215171. （2015•西北大附中•高二上期中）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Nowadays pollution has been become a serious problem．The air，seas，rivers and land has been polluted．It does greatly harm not only to human being，but also to animals and plants．We can't have a fresh air because many factories have sent out poison gases into the air．It is reported some strange diseases have resulted in eating polluted food．There is a saying：Nature is the mother of mankind．We should not mistreat our mother．Strong efforts must made to stop the destruction of the environment．If everyone does his best to protect our mother，I believe，she will become more better in the future．

共享时间:2015-11-21 难度:2 相似度:1

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203810. （2024•周至四中•高一上期末）关于wildlife protection （保护野生动物）谈谈你的想法，要点包括：
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（2）个人方面；
（3）你的行动。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

共享时间:2024-02-09 难度:2 相似度:1

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204446. （2023•临潼区•高一下期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了环保手工艺品设计大赛（Environmental Handicrafts Design Contest）。请你给校英文报写一篇关于该活动的报道，内容包括：
（1）比赛的时间、地点和目的；
（2）比赛的要求和结果；
（3）学生的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Environmental Handicrafts Design Contest in Our School ______

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212815. （2025•二十六中•高二下期中）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华，为配合你校正在开展的"保护环境，从我做起"主题活动，请你用英语写一封倡议书。内容包括：
（1）发出号召；
（2）提出倡议；
（3）表达祝愿。
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（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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