假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及其修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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205279. （2021•阎良区•高一上期末）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the zoo with Lily on yesterday.There was lots of people there.I found a girl crying in the zoo.She was lost and she couldn't found her mother.We decided to helping her.I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo.At the same time Lily played with the little girl but looked after her careful there.The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily.At last her mother came，that made me feel very happy.I thought I really did a well thing.Unless everyone helps each other，the world will become more beautiful.

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人际交往，记叙文，

[答案]

删除

；

2.was

改为

were

；

3.found

改为

find

；

4.helping

改为

help

；

在

best

后增加

；

6.but

改为

and

；

7.careful

改为

carefully

；

8.that

改为

which

；

9.well

改为

good

；

10.Unless

改为

If.

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I went to the zoo with Lily on yesterday.There was lots of people there.I found a girl crying in the zoo.She was lost and she couldn't found her mother.We decided to helping her.I tried my best ∧find the broadcasting station in the zoo.At the same time Lily played with the little girl but looked after her careful there.The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily.At last her mother came，that made me feel very happy.I thought I really did a well thing.Unless everyone helps each other，the world will become more beautiful.
详解：
1.考查介词。句意：我昨天和莉莉去动物园了。副词yesterday"昨天"在句中作时间状语，不需要介词on。故删除on。
2.考查时态及主谓一致。句意：那里有很多人。结合上下文可知，句子是在叙述过去的事情，应用一般过去时，分析可知，句子为there be句型，主语lots of people是复数，be动词应用were。故was改为were。
3.考查动词原形。句意：她迷路了，找不到她的妈妈。情态动词couldn't后应用动词原形。故found改为find。
4.考查动词原形。句意：我们决定帮助她。根据decide to do sth."决定做某事"可知，此处应用动词原形。故helping改为help。
5.考查固定短语。句意：我尽了最大的努力去寻找动物园里的广播站。try one's best to do sth."尽某人最大努力做某事"，固定用法，其中to不可省略。故在best后加to。
6.考查连词。句意：与此同时，莉莉和小女孩一起玩，在那里仔细地照顾她。根据句意可知，played with the little girl和looked after her之间是并列关系，故应用连词and连接。故but改为and。
7.考查副词。句意：与此同时，莉莉和小女孩一起玩，在那里仔细地照顾她。分析可知，此处应用副词carefully"仔细地"作状语，修饰动词短语looked after。故careful改为carefully。
8.考查定语从句关系词。句意：最后她妈妈来了，这让我感到非常高兴。分析可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为前面整个主句，从句中缺少主语，故应用关系代词which引导。故that改为which。
9.考查形容词。句意：我觉得我真的做了件好事。分析可知，此处应用形容词good"好的"作定语，修饰名词thing。故well改为good。
10.考查状语从句引导词。句意：如果每个人都互相帮助，世界将变得更加美丽。根据句意可知，此处应用从属连词if引导条件状语从句，表示"如果"，unless意为"除非"，不符合题意。故Unless改为If。

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注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
   When I was child，my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well-paid job.Therefore，what I value most is a sense of achievement.Since my childhood，I have dreamed of being a doctor.
   The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache.I thought if I am a doctor，I would ease his pain.Then as I growing up，I came across Lin Qiaozhi's story.It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination.Why not carry on her career？Undoubtedly，being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
   I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.

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