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I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have an English pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenty，and with hobbies similar to mine．In my mind，she is someone interesting in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it is better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at home for some time．I hope I can share∧ her my experiences in travelling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country．I am looking forward to hear from you soon．
1．去掉for 考查介词．动词ask的后面可以直接加宾语从句，介词for是多余的．动词短语ask for后面通常接sth做宾语．
2．hopeful改为hopefully 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词．句意为：我希望能够交一个20多岁的英国笔友．
3．twenty改为twenties 考查固定搭配．在某人二十岁，应是in one's+twenties
4．interesting改为interested 考查形容词．be interested in…意为"…对…感兴趣"，是固定搭配，使用interested in traveling修饰前面的代词someone．
5．Beside﹣Besides 考查副词．本句中表示"此外，而且"．Beside是介词，意思是"在…旁边"．
6．that改为one 考查代词．that指代同类异物时表示特指，而表示同类异物泛指时用代词one．
7．share后加with 考查介词．share with意为"与…分享[合用]"，是固定搭配．句意为：我希望能够和她一起分享我的旅行经历．
8．Whichever﹣whatever 考查名词性从句．从句中缺少have的宾语，所以用连接代词，whichever表示有选择的含义，而句中表示无论什么，没有选择意思，所以用whatever．
9．would﹣will 考查时态．根据句意：我相信我这样做一定会提高我的英语，应该表示以后会有进步，故使用一般将来时，故would改为will．
10．hear﹣hearing 考查固定短语．本句中考查固定短语搭配．look forward to doing sth 盼望着做某事．．故hear改为hearing．
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