[答案]
1.删除last前的on
2.They改为We
3.while改为when
4.exciting改为excited
5.immediate改为immediately
6.were改为was
7.Therefore改为However
8.Noticed改为Noticing
9.break前加a
10.do改为did
[解析]
My grandparents invited us to their house in the countryside to help harvest peanuts on last Saturday.They jumped at the invitation.The next day,my parents and I had hardly reached the destination while we were greeted by a green peanut field.I was so exciting that I rolled up my sleeves immediate and set about digging peanuts.In the beginning,I were enthusiastic and energetic.Therefore,after a while,my lands began to ache and I was bathed in sweat.Noticed my situation,Grandma reminded me to take∧ break before starting again.Only then do I learn an important life lesson:harvest and comfort can not coexist.
详解:
1.考查介词。句意:上周六,我的祖父母邀请我们去他们在农村的家帮助收获花生。根据"last+时间名词"作时间状语时,其前不加任何介词,所以此处介词on应删除。故将last前的on删除。
2.考查代词。句意:我们欣然接受了邀请。结合句意可知。收到祖父母的邀请应该高兴的是"我们"而不是"他们"。故将They改为We。
3.考查连词。句意:第二天,我和父母刚到达目的地,就看到一片绿色的花生田。分析句子可知,此处为固定句形"hardly...when..."意为"一……就……"符合句意。故将while改为when。
4.考查形容词。句意:我太兴奋了,我立刻卷起袖子,开始挖花生。分析句子可知,此处为形容词作表语,主语是人,所以应为excited意为"兴奋的"符合句意。故将exciting改为excited。
5.考查副词。句意:我太兴奋了,我立刻卷起袖子,开始挖花生。分析句子可知,修饰动词rolled up应为副词。故将immediate改为immediately。
6.考查主谓一致。句意:刚开始的时候,我充满热情和活力。分析句子可知,句子主语是第一人称单数,谓语动词应为单数形式,且根据全文讲述的是过去的事情,所以使用一般过去时。故将were改为was。
7.考查副词。句意:然而,过了一会儿,我的土地开始疼痛,我浑身是汗。结合句意可知,"In the beginning,I were enthusiastic and energetic."与"after a while,my lands began to ache and I was bathed in sweat."之间为转折关系,Therefore为副词作状语意为"因此"表示因果关系。故将Therefore改为However。
8.考查现在分词。句意:奶奶注意到了我的情况,提醒我在重新开始之前先休息一下。分析句子可知,notice所在的部分应为句子的状语,notice与逻辑主语Grandma之间为主动关系,所以此处应为现在分词形式作状语,且位于句首,首字母需大写。故将Noticed改为Noticing。
9.考查冠词。句意:直到那时,我才学到了人生的重要一课:收获和安逸是不能共存的。分析句子可知,此处为固定短语take a break意为"休息一下",所以此处缺少不定冠词a。故在break前加a。
10.考查动词时态。句意:直到那时,我才学到了人生的重要一课:收获和安逸是不能共存的。分析句子可知,此处only then位于句首,句子需倒装,即将助动词或系动词提到主语之前,根据时间状语then可知,该句应为一般过去时态,所以助动词应为did。故将do改为did。
[点评]
本题考查了"日常生活,记叙文,",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。