假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有处语言错误每句中最多有两处错误每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词删除把多余的词用斜线划掉修改在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意每处错误及修改均仅限一词只允许修改处多者从第处起不计分

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204284. （2023•阎良区•高二下期末）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday morning，we held an meaningful performance in front of the supermarket where there were several hundreds people.Our goal was making people to think about the overuse of plastic bags.Several volunteers wore plastic bags but walked around and through the crowd.The performance calls on people to use cloth bags instead plastic ones.Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from the customers in two food markets.The others were collected from a primary school.On that day，when left the supermarket，the customers were advised to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need.A number of plastic bags was collected in just two hours.

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环境保护，记叙文，

[答案]

1.an

改为

2.hundreds

改为

hundred

删除

people

后的

4.but

改为

and

5.calls

改为

called

6.instead

后加

7.wore

改为

worn

8.left

改为

leaving

9.we

改为

they

10.was

改为

were

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详解：
1.考查冠词。句意：上周六上午，我们在沃尔玛超市前举行了一场有意义的表演，那里有数百人。meaningful发音以辅音音素开头，其前面不定冠词应用a。故将an改为a。
2.考查量词。句意：上周六上午，我们在沃尔玛超市前举行了一场有意义的表演，那里有数百人。hundred被基数词或者several/some等修饰时不用复数形式，只有和of构成hundreds of短语时才用复数形式。故将hundreds改为hundred。
3.考查固定搭配。句意：我们的目标是让人们思考过度使用塑料袋的问题。make sb.do sth."让某人做某事"是固定搭配，应用省略to的不定式作宾语补足语。故删除people后的to。
4.考查连词。句意：几名志愿者戴着塑料袋，在人群中走来走去。根据句意，wore plastic bags和walked around and through the crowd是并列关系，用并列连词and连接。故将but改为and。
5.考查时态。句意：该表演呼吁人们使用布袋而不是塑料袋。本文讲述过去的事情，谓语动词calls on应使用一般过去时态，用过去式called。故将calls改为called。
6.考查介词。句意：该表演呼吁人们使用布袋而不是塑料袋。instead是副词，意为"代替，顶替"，其后常常为句子；instead of是介词短语，意为"而不是"，符合句意。故在instead后面加上of。
7.考查过去分词。句意：表演者穿的一些塑料袋是从两个食品市场的顾客那里收集的，其他的是从一个小学收集的。"wore by the performers"作后置定语修饰名词the plastic bags，wear是非谓语形式，与其逻辑主语bags之间是被动关系，应用过去分词worn表被动。故将wore改为worn。
8.考查非谓语动词。句意：在那一天，当离开超市时，顾客被建议上交他们不需要的塑料购物袋。"when left the supermarket"作时间状语，leave是非谓语动词，与其逻辑主语the customers之间是主动关系，用现在分词表主动。故将left改为leaving。
9.考查代词。句意：在那一天，当离开超市时，顾客被建议上交他们不需要的塑料购物袋。结合语境，此处是指消费者离开超市后被建议上交"他们"不需要的塑料袋，因此定语从句的主语应是"他们"，而非"我们"。故将we改为they。
10.考查主谓一致。句意：短短两小时内就收集了大量塑料袋。"a number of+名词"意为"大量……"，作主语时谓语动词用复数。故将was改为were。

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204246. （2023•长安区一中•高二上期末）     假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    How time flies!I have hardly had time to enjoy the warmth of my home while it's time go back to school.This winter I spend ten days studying math，chemistry and physics，none of them was easy for me.
    And I still had some fun during the Spring Festival.I had attended my uncle's wedding and my new aunt was very beautiful.To my disappointing，I didn't get many lucky money as I had expected.I also went to the cinema with several classmates.We played jokes on each other and had a big meal in a restaurant calling "Red Lobster".The food there was very delicious and we all really enjoyed myself.

共享时间:2023-02-08 难度:2 相似度:1

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201812. （2024•西安中学•七模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring.With no time for the breakfast，I rushed out of my house.I had intended to catch the 7：30 subway，and I didn't make it.Have a little time left，I take a taxi instead.I arrived at the school only find，with great sadness mixed with some relief，that the school where should have been full of students was empty.It was Saturday.However，our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end.When I returned home，I found myself lock out.I had left my key at home.Just my luck.

共享时间:2024-06-08 难度:2 相似度:1

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204132. （2023•西安中学•高二上期末）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago，I was addicted for computer games.I played with games day and night on weekends.I lost interesting in my studies and I was often absent from school.
My parents got very worrying about me.They persuaded me to quit play games，but I wouldn't give up my bad habit.Later my English teacher gave me some advices on how to quit the bad Habit.Listing the disadvantages of playing computer games on a piece of paper，I put them on my bed and tried to remember them.Beside the list were my effective schedule.I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid playing games.After that I became active in studying and turn out to be one of the top students in our school.

共享时间:2023-02-23 难度:2 相似度:1

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