[答案]
Thisday,insteadofsittingstill,hethrewhimselffromthechair.Helandedonthegroundwithathud,hislegssplayedoutuselesslybeneathhim.Buthedidn'tletthepainorthehelplessnessstophim.Ignoringthesharpstingsshootingthroughhisbody,hebegantocrawltowardsthefence,hishandsdiggingintothedirt.Hismother,shockedandworried,rushedtohisside,buthepleadedwithhertolethimbe.Hewasdeterminedtomakehisfirststeptowardswalkingagain.
Usingthefenceashissupport,heraisedhimselfupslowly.Hisbodytrembledwiththeeffort,andbeadsofsweatrolleddownhisforehead.Witheachinchheliftedhimself,hewasfightingagainsttheodds.Hegraspedthefencetightly,hisknucklesturningwhite.Then,withafinalburstofstrength,hestoodupright.Foramoment,heteeteredontheedgeofbalance,buthedidn'tfall.Hismotherwatchedinawe,tearsstreamingdownherface.Fromthatdayon,hepracticedeveryday,usingthefencetotakehisfirstfalteringsteps,asmallbutsignificantsteptowardshisgoalofwalkingagain.
[解析]
This day,instead of sitting still,he threw himself from the chair.He landed on the ground with a thud,his legs splayed out uselessly beneath him.But he didn't let the pain or the helplessness stop him.Ignoring the sharp stings shooting through his body,he began to crawl towards the fence,his hands digging into the dirt.【高分句型一】His mother,shocked and worried,rushed to his side,but he pleaded with her to let him be.He was determined to make his first step towards walking again. (描写了某天小男孩不再安坐轮椅,而是从椅子上扑到地上,不顾疼痛和母亲阻拦,开始向围栏爬去,决心迈出重新走路的第一步)
Using the fence as his support,he raised himself up slowly.His body trembled with the effort,and beads of sweat rolled down his forehead.With each inch he lifted himself,he was fighting against the odds.He grasped the fence tightly,his knuckles turning white.Then,with a final burst of strength,he stood upright.For a moment,he teetered on the edge of balance,but he didn't fall.His mother watched in awe,tears streaming down her face.【高分句型二】From that day on,he practiced every day,using the fence to take his first faltering steps,a small but significant step towards his goal of walking again.(描写了小男孩借助围栏慢慢起身,身体颤抖、汗流浃背,最终成功站立,此后每天都用围栏练习走路,向着目标前进)
[点评]
本题考查了"记叙文,读后续写,生活感悟,",属于"典型题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。