[答案]
Hearingwhathercoachsaid,thegirlwasindeepthought.Headdown,shethoughtofhertimidity—shelackedconfidencebecauseshehadlostherleftarm.Frequently,shegaveuponherself.Butsometimes,shewasheardmurmuringtoherself,"HowcanImakeit?""I'mafraidit'sbeyondmyability,"andthelike.Sheevenrefusedtokeepintouchwitholdfriendsforfearofbeinglaughedat.What'sevenworse,fluentlyasshehadpracticedathome,shedidnotdaretoshowupinthefrontoftheclassroom.
Withtearsrunningdownherface,sherealizedwhatshelackedwasjust"onemove".It'sthemovetobecomeconfident.Fortunately,thegirleventuallycametorealizethatinlifeshehasonlyoneenemy,herself,todefeat.Quitedetermined,sherejoinedherfriendsandfollowedherdreamtobeapainter.Equippedwithcourageandconfidence,thegirlbecamethemasterofherself,livingawonderfullife.
[解析]
Hearing what her coach said,the girl was in deep thought.Head down,she thought of her timidity — she lacked confidence because she had lost her left arm.Frequently,she gave up on herself.But sometimes,she was heard murmuring to herself, "How can I make it?" "I'm afraid it's beyond my ability," and the like.She even refused to keep in touch with old friends for fear of being laughed at.What's even worse,fluently as she had practiced at home,she did not dare to show up in the front of the classroom.【高分句型一】(描写了女孩的心理活动)
With tears running down her face,she realized what she lacked was just "one move".It's the move to become confident.Fortunately,the girl eventually came to realize that in life she has only one enemy,herself,to defeat.Quite determined,she rejoined her friends and followed her dream to be a painter.Equipped with courage and confidence,the girl became the master of herself,living a wonderful life.【高分句型二】(描写了女孩意识到自己的敌人只有她自己,以及她之后的改变)
[点评]
本题考查了"记叙文,读后续写,生活感悟,",属于"难典题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。