[答案]
JustasTimwasabouttoapologizeandstepaway,oneofthebandmates,thedrummerJack,walkedover.HeputafirmhandonTim'sshoulderandsaid,"Rememberthattimein2012whenweplayedinthattinypubduringastorm?Thepowerwentout,butwekeptplayingbythelightofourphoneflashlights.Theaudiencelovedit!Thisisjustanotherchallenge,andwe'vefacedtougheronestogether."Otherbandmatesjoinedin,sharingmorememoriesoftheirearlystrugglesandtriumphsonthesmall﹣stage.Theylaughedastheyrecalledthetimewhentheyforgotthelyricsandmadeupnewonesonthespot,whichsurprisinglybecameahitwiththeaudience.
Surroundedbythesefamiliarvoicesandstories,Timfeltsomethingshiftinsidehim.Thememoriesoftheirsharedpassionanddeterminationoverthepasttwentyyearscamefloodingback.Hetookadeepbreath,andasparkoftheoldconfidencereturnedtohiseyes.Headjustedhisguitarstrap,lookedathisbandmates,andnoddedfirmly.Whenthedirectorcalled"Action!"again,Tim'sfingersmovedsmoothlyontheguitarstrings.Themusicfilledthestudio,andthistime,therewerenowrongnotes.Theirfirstmusicvideowasfinallyunderway,aperfectblendoftheirpastexperiencesandpresentefforts.
[解析]
Just as Tim was about to apologize and step away,one of the bandmates,the drummer Jack,walked over.He put a firm hand on Tim's shoulder and said, "Remember that time in 2012 when we played in that tiny pub during a storm?The power went out,but we kept playing by the light of our phone flashlights.The audience loved it!This is just another challenge,and we've faced tougher ones together." Other bandmates joined in,sharing more memories of their early struggles and triumphs on the small﹣stage. 【高分句型一】They laughed as they recalled the time when they forgot the lyrics and made up new ones on the spot,which surprisingly became a hit with the audience.(描写蒂姆在拍摄音乐视频时因紧张频频失误欲离场,杰克等队友回忆过往演出经历,暖心鼓励他直面挑战)
Surrounded by these familiar voices and stories,Tim felt something shift inside him.The memories of their shared passion and determination over the past twenty years came flooding back.He took a deep breath,and a spark of the old confidence returned to his eyes.He adjusted his guitar strap,looked at his bandmates,and nodded firmly.When the director called "Action!" again,Tim's fingers moved smoothly on the guitar strings. 【高分句型二】The music filled the studio,and this time,there were no wrong notes.Their first music video was finally underway,a perfect blend of their past experiences and present efforts.(描写队友的话语唤起往昔回忆,蒂姆重拾自信,调整状态投入拍摄,顺利推进音乐视频制作 )
[点评]
本题考查了"记叙文,读后续写,生活感悟,",属于"典型题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。