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ThemomentIfinishedmyspeech,theauditoriumfellsilent.Foranagonizingsecond,Ifearedtheworst.HadIbombed?Then,likeasuddenthunderclap,applauseerupted.Theaudiencerosetotheirfeet,cheeringandwhistling.Iwasstunned.ClassmatesIbarelyknewsmiledandgavemethumbs﹣up.Someevenrushedforwardtocongratulateme.Overwhelmedwithreliefandjoy,Irealizedthatmyhardworkhadpaidoff.Ihadfacedmyfearandtriumphed.
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Laterthatafternoon,Mrs.Leehandedmeasmallenvelope.Insidewasanotethatread,"Iknewyoucoulddoit.Yourcourageandthepowerofyourwordsareinspiring.Keepbelievinginyourself."Alongwiththenotewasamedal."Youwonsecondplace,"shesaid,beamingwithpride.Holdingthemedal,Ifeltanew﹣foundsenseofself﹣assurance.Mrs.Lee'sfaithinmehadbeenthepushIneeded.Fromthatdayon,Iwasnolongerthegirlwhotrembledatthethoughtofpublicspeaking.Iwasaconqueror,readytofaceanychallengethatcamemyway.
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The moment I finished my speech,the auditorium fell silent.For an agonizing second,I feared the worst.Had I bombed?Then,like a sudden thunderclap,applause erupted.The audience rose to their feet,cheering and whistling.【高分句型一】I was stunned.Classmates I barely knew smiled and gave me thumbs ﹣ up.Some even rushed forward to congratulate me.Overwhelmed with relief and joy,I realized that my hard work had paid off.I had faced my fear and triumphed.(让作者意外的是,礼堂里爆发出雷鸣般的掌声,作者的演讲大获成功)
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Later that afternoon,Mrs.Lee handed me a small envelope.Inside was a note that read, "I knew you could do it.Your courage and the power of your words are inspiring.Keep believing in yourself." Along with the note was a medal. "You won second place," she said,beaming with pride.Holding the medal,I felt a new ﹣ found sense of self ﹣assurance.Mrs.Lee's faith in me had been the push I needed.From that day on,I was no longer the girl who trembled at the thought of public speaking.【高分句型二】I was a conqueror,ready to face any challenge that came my way.(李老师为作者感到自豪,而作者也拥有了自信)
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本题考查了"记叙文,读后续写,生活感悟,",属于"难典题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。