[答案]
Istoodthere,watchinginamazement,ashewalkedtotheteashop.HestoodatthedoorandaskedforsomethingforwhichhepaidwiththemoneyIgave,andcollectedabunandacupofhottea.Hethenwentbacktotheyoungman,helpedhimtosit,andhelpedhimtoeatthebunanddrinkthetea.Hecamebacktohisoldplacewherehewassittingandsatdown.Iwasstillstandingtherewatchingallthis.
TheoldmannoticedthatIwasstilltheresohelookedup.Heexplainedthattheyoungmanhadnoteatenfortwodaysandhadnoenergyeventositup.Thatwaswhyhelayonthepavement.Suddenly,Ifeltashamedofjudgingothersbytheirappearance.Ifoundmyselfsosmallandadmiredthenonjudgementalgenerosityofthemanwhohadsolittlecomparedtome.HewastrulygenerousandIlearnedthelessonofnonjudgementalgenerosityfromthismanwhowasinafarlessprivilegedstatethanme.
[解析]
I stood there,watching in amazement,as he walked to the tea shop.He stood at the door and asked for something for which he paid with the money I gave,and collected a bun and a cup of hot tea. 【高分句型一】He then went back to the young man,helped him to sit,and helped him to eat the bun and drink the tea.He came back to his old place where he was sitting and sat down.I was still standing there watching all this.(老人去茶铺买了吃食给年轻人)
The old man noticed that I was still there so he looked up.He explained that the young man had not eaten for two days and had no energy even to sit up.That was why he lay on the pavement.Suddenly,I felt ashamed of judging others by their appearance.I found myself so small and admired the nonjudgemental generosity of the man who had so little compared to me.【高分句型二】He was truly generous and I learned the lesson of nonjudgemental generosity from this man who was in a far less privileged state than me.(老人对作者解释年轻人的情况,以及作者从这件事中明白了在慷慨助人时不按个人道德评判的重要性)
[点评]
本题考查了"记叙文,读后续写,生活感悟,",属于"典型题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。