[答案]
Withmyheartknockingwildly,Iwalkeddownthedivingboardtowardsitsend.Lookingdown,Ifoundallmyclassmateswerelookingupatme.Myfacesuddenlyfelthot.Finally,Iignoredthem.Picturingthefourstepsofdiving,Ijumped.ThenIfoldedmybodybutfailedtoreachformytoes.Andinsteadofenteringthewaterlikeanarrow,Ifellintothewater,withmybodybeingflat.Asaresult,itcausedahugesound,whichmadealltheclassmatesburstoutlaughing.
KnowingIfailed,Iclimbedoutofthepool,embarrassed.Afterclass,Ms.Robbinscomfortedandencouragedme.InthefollowingmanyMondaymornings,Ipracticedagainandagainunderherguidance.Gradually,Ibecamemoreconfidentandlessshy.Finally,Iattendedthedivingtestagainandperformedwell.Thistime,myclassmatescheeredandclapped.Iwassoglad.Iknewmysuccessresultedfrommybeatingmyshynessandmyhardpractice.
[解析]
With my heart knocking wildly,I walked down the diving board towards its end.Looking down,I found all my classmates were looking up at me.【高分句型一】My face suddenly felt hot.Finally,I ignored them.Picturing the four steps of diving,I jumped.Then I folded my body but failed to reach for my toes.And instead of entering the water like an arrow,I fell into the water,with my body being flat.【高分句型二】As a result,it caused a huge sound,which made all the classmates burst out laughing.(描写了作者参加考试的过程)
Knowing I failed,I climbed out of the pool,embarrassed.After class,Ms.Robbins comforted and encouraged me.In the following many Monday mornings,I practiced again and again under her guidance.Gradually,I became more confident and less shy.Finally,I attended the diving test again and performed well.This time,my classmates cheered and clapped.I was so glad.I knew my success resulted from my beating my shyness and my hard practice.(描写了作者在老师鼓励下再次参加考试)
[点评]
本题考查了"读后续写,",属于"常考题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。