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219520. （2020•西安中学•高三上四月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    We had a school trip on last Sunday.Hundreds of us took part in it excited.
    At 8：00 am，we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries.When someone fall behind，others would come or offer help.About 2 hours later，we all reached the top.Seeing from there，the river below looked like a thin belt.We were very happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
    The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did we get close to nature，but also we relaxed myself.What wonderful time!

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人与自我，

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（1）去掉on（2）excited改为excitedly （3）enjoyed改为enjoying（4）sceneries改为scenery（5）fall改为fell （6）or改为and（7）Seeing改为Seen（8）very改为so （9）myself改为ourselves（10）What后加上a

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We had a school trip on last Sunday.Hundreds of us took part in it excited.
At 8：00 am，we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries.When someone fall behind，others would come or offer help.About 2 hours later，we all reached the top.Seeing from there，the river below looked like a thin belt.We were very happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did we get close to nature，but also we relaxed myself.What ∧wonderful time!
详解：
（1）去掉on.考查时间状语。句意：上星期天，我们进行了一次学校旅行。last修饰表示时间的名词Sunday，可直接在句子中作状语，不需要加介词on。故去掉on.
（2）excited改为excitedly.考查副词。句意：我们数百人兴奋地参加了。副词excitedly意为"兴奋地"，修饰动词短语took part in作状语。故将excited改为excitedly.
（3）enjoyed改为enjoying.考查现在分词。句意：一路上我们聊天，唱歌，笑，享受新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。分析句子结构可知，句子的主语是we，谓语是were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoy与其逻辑主语we之间是主动关系，因此用现在分词enjoying作伴随状语。故将enjoyed改为enjoying.
（4）sceneries改为scenery.考查名词。句意：一路上我们聊天，唱歌，笑，享受新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。当scenery用作表示"风景"的集合名词时，不可数，没有复数形式，故将sceneries改为scenery.
（5）fall改为fell.考查时态。句意：当有人落后的时候，有人会来帮忙。根据第一段中"last Sunday"可知，这次旅行发生在过去，旅行途中发生的动作，应该用一般过去时，fall的动词过去式是fell。故将fall改为fell.
（6）or改为and.考查连词。句意：当有人落后的时候，有人会来帮忙。"come"与"offer help"是两个并列的动作，or表示选择关系，and表示并列关系。故将or改为and.
（7）Seeing改为Seen.考查过去分词。句意：从那里看，下面的河看起来像一条细带。分析句子结构可知，句子主干是the river below looked like a thin belt，see与其逻辑主语the river之间是被动关系，用其过去分词作时间状语。故将Seeing改为Seen.
（8）very改为so.考查结果状语从句。句意：我们如此高兴，以至于跳起来欢呼。分析句意可知，这是一个结果状语从句，so…that意为"如此……以至于"，引导结果状语从句，故将very改为so.
（9）myself改为ourselves.考查代词。句意：我们不仅亲近了大自然，而且放松了我们自己。relax oneself意为"放松某人自己"，we对应的反身代词是ourselves，故将myself改为ourselves.
（10）What后加上a.考查固定短语。句意：我们度过了多么美好的时光！a wonderful time 一段美好的时光，该短语是固定短语，故在What与wonderful之间加上a.

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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club．Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time；car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days．

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214594. （2019•西安高级中学•高一上期中）下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today we had a chemistry test．I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it．Suddenly Mary，my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers．After think for some time，I let her copy my answers．But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher's office．The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests．We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents．I was very upset．I didn't cheat．I was just helping a friend．Why doee punish me？

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