[解析]
Dear James,
Thanks for your letter.I'm delight that you're coming over and we're all looking forward to see you again.
I can understand you are nervous about travelling by your own.Don't worry!We'll pick you∧at the airport.
Telling me your flight number and arrival time,and we can meet you while you arrive.Kate wonders if you
can bringhim some of the wonderful cheeses we eat in your parents' house last month.She keep talking about
whether it should be a problem you will bring it into the country.Let me know as soon as you book your flight.
详解:
1.delight改为delighted 考查形容词 此处在句中作表语,说明的是主语的状态,故用形容词delighted.
2.see改为seeing 考查动名词 look forward to doing sth.意为:期待/盼望做某事;其中的to为介词,故其后应使用动名词形式作宾语;故用seeing.
3.you后加up 考查固定搭配 pick sb.up意为:开车接某人;故在you后加up.
4.by 改为on 考查固定搭配 on one's own意为:独自,独立地;故用on.
5.Telling改为Tell 考查祈使句 本句为祈使句,省略的主语是you,所以谓语动词应使用原形,故用Tell.
6.while改为when 考查从属连词 when引导的时间状语从句中的动词可以是终止性动词,也可以是延续性动词,而while从句中的动词必须是延续性动词;由于此处的 arrive为终止性动词;故用when.
7.him改为her 考查人称代词的一致性 此处在句中作宾语,指代的是:Kate's;故用her.
8.cheeses改为cheese 考查不可数名词 由于cheese是不可数名词,其后不能加s;故用cheese.
9.eat改为ate 考查时态 根据时间状语"last month"可知,此处指的是上个月发生的事情,应使用一般过去时;故用ate.
10.keep改为keeps 考查时态及主谓一致 此处讲述的是她即Kate现在的情况,应使用一般现在时,由于主语She为第三人称单数形式;故用keeps.