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When I look at this picture of myself.I realizeofhow fast time flies.Ihadgrown
have
not only physically,andalso mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo
but
wastook,I entered my second year of high school andbecomea new member of the school
taken became
music club.Around me in∧picture are the thingstheywere very important in my life at that
this/the that/which
time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studyingdifferencekinds of cars and
different
planes,playing pop music,and collecting thelatemusic albums.This picture often brings
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back to me many happy memories ofyourhigh school days.
my
1.of去掉,考查从句的用法,realize是及物动词后接宾语从句,因此不用of.
2.had改为have,考查时态,句中有时间状语 in the past few years,表示从过去到现在一直持续的状态,应使用现在完成时.
3.and改为but,考查固定搭配,not only…but also"不仅…,而且".
4.took改为taken,考查被动语态,photo与take构成被动的关系,因此使用被动语态be done,take的过去分词是taken.
5.become改为became,考查谓语动词,and连接两个并列的谓语,前使用entered一般过去时,因此become也要改为一般过去时became.
6.in后加this/the,考查代词或者定冠词,根据语境指的是"在这张图片",可以使用this或the.
7.they 改为that/which,考查定语从句的引导词,things作为先行词,引导定语从句可以使用that或者which.
8.difference改为different,考查形容词,此处应使用形容词修饰后面的名词kinds.
9.late改为latest,考查形容词的辨析,late"晚的",latest"最新的",根据语境是"最新的音乐唱片".
10.your改为my,考查形容词性物主代词,联系上文语境可知此处指"我的高中时光",应使用my.